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cuzimastripper September 3 2010, 10:35:01 UTC
Right? I'm so in love with first time fics because I adore the build up and the suspense and the exploding passion when it finally happens. I guess I feel like I get something out of the whole deal, haha.

And aww, being sick is awful :( I hope you feel better!

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darkemberdagger September 3 2010, 10:36:02 UTC
definitely liking this story. can't wait for the next chapter

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cuzimastripper September 3 2010, 11:35:18 UTC
Thanks!

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shamethebells September 3 2010, 11:10:22 UTC
Ooh, I love this! I adore the premise and your characterization is spot-on. I'm anxiously awaiting chapter two!

(Also? You're using one of my icons! That pleases me immensely. ♥)

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cuzimastripper September 3 2010, 11:37:10 UTC
Thank you! When I write for a new fandom I'm always super nervous about my characterizations, so I'm happy they're at least semi-believable haha. & I'm currently in the middle of writing chapter two, which I hope I can finish tonight otherwise it'll have to wait till after the weekend since I'm having people over and that long of a wait for the next chapter would be blah. lol.

& yes! I adore it ^_^

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timepassedyouby September 3 2010, 11:36:05 UTC
I really like this! I love slow build-ups - it's all about the journey, people! I'm definitely waiting for the next chapter.

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cuzimastripper September 3 2010, 11:37:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm a big fan of slow buildups myself ^_^

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spockette September 3 2010, 11:39:19 UTC
Oh, I love this. I'm such a sucker for first-time fics.

You've got a great grasp of the character's voices and this is very well-written.

Can't wait to read the next part.

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cuzimastripper September 3 2010, 18:53:59 UTC
Haha, me too.

Thank you :]

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