Fanfiction || Forgotten || Eliot/Sophie

Nov 26, 2009 01:36

Title: Forgotten
Author: cuzimastripper
Fandom: Leverage
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Eliot/Sophie
Length: 7,140 words
Series: Part one of the Candy Covered Hearts Tainted By Masochistic Thoughts series
Prompt: Eliot/Sophie, angsty, one-time, no strings attached sex; Eliot wants to forgive her and Sophie just wants to forget. (Right around The First David Job and ( Read more... )

series: candy masochistic hearts, writing: fanfiction, tv: leverage, character: eliot spencer, character: sophie devereaux

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serenelystrange November 26 2009, 07:32:40 UTC
That was pretty messed up.. but way hotter than it had any right to be. :D Although I am under the impression that Eliot + Anything = HOT.. so i'm pretty biased, lol.

That all being said.. if Leverage was on HBO(or ok, skinemax, lol).. I could see something like this happening.

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cuzimastripper November 26 2009, 07:48:56 UTC
Hey, trust me, I've met people like that lol. Like how I made Sophie. Strong people who have all the power in the world, who realize they want nothing more than to just be treated like fucking... like nothing at all.

It's a personal kink of mine anyway, regardless. This seemed like a good excuse as any to write it xD

God, if Leverage was on HBO, I'd be a much happier person. Mainly cause I already know Gina and Beth aren't opposed to nakedness haha.

..... Damn, now I have naked Parker/Sophie thoughts. I haven't had those in awhile. *wanders off into my own happy place*

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serenelystrange November 26 2009, 08:07:59 UTC
*snickers* Enjoy your happy place thoughts, :D

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milydo November 26 2009, 07:54:37 UTC
"Eliot + Anything = HOT" I totally agree ! The man could hump a rock and I'd still find it hot.

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milydo November 26 2009, 07:52:29 UTC
Right on time for me to read during my commute !

Except that was hot, like, really hot. How am I supposed to go to work and actually focus now ?????

Thanks for writing this, as usual it was a nice read : a good idea, well written (I know I say this all the time but badly written fics are a big pet peeve of mine)

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cuzimastripper November 26 2009, 07:55:13 UTC
Lmao. It's all part of an elaborate, strategic plan to distract you at work. There's blue prints and everything.

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milydo November 26 2009, 08:04:01 UTC
Blueprints ? is Parker going to drop down from the ceiling ? Is Eliot going to knock out the security guards, throw me over his shoulder and carry my out of here ? Is...

Oh great, now I'm gonna be daydreaming for hours.

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cuzimastripper November 26 2009, 08:12:28 UTC
ROFL.

Yes, that's exactly what's gonna happen. And while Eliot wisks you away, Parker's gonna violate me in one of the storage closets at your work.

Damn. Now I'm daydreaming....

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cuzimastripper November 26 2009, 13:25:53 UTC
Haha, see, that's what I wanted to play with. The fact that is it really Eliot being the one in control, or is it Sophie? Sophie wanted it after all, mistress of manipulation. So even though she's letting him do whatever he wants to to her, letting him do things that no one else has ever done to her, the fact remains that he couldn't do any of that without her permission in the first place.

Proof that subs really do have all the control in the end.

I must admit, I have an urge to write a sequel. If only to delve deep into Sophie's mind and have her analyze her twisted little fetish lol. But IDK. Maybe.

AND OMG. I forgot to mention your icon you hunted for. LOVE! So perfect for the fic xD

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taylor_serenil November 26 2009, 17:11:10 UTC
That was hot in a *very* messed up way. And actually kind of believable considering Eliot probably felt pretty betrayed by the whole David Job thing. (Oh, and rimming FTW. It's not really my kink, but it's hot here).

And yeah, who really has the control here is rather up for grabs, especially considering Eliot's line of 'no' or 'stop' means no more.

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cuzimastripper November 26 2009, 21:43:49 UTC
Rimming is one of those things that tend to make people squicky, but I personally enjoy it lol.

That's how it is with doms, and what separates them from monsters. Which means yeah, subs are still the ones in control, no matter how much they're tossed around and abused. The dom/sub relationship really interests me in that way.

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taylor_serenil November 27 2009, 00:48:59 UTC
The latest thing *I'm* working on (if the porn goes the way I'm thinking right now) has rimming *and* pegging, so apparently I'm working down the list of fictional kinks or something.

Speaking of the dom/sub thing, have you read me_ya_ri's "Exploring the Limits"? Because it's an interesting (and HOT) take on how relationships can overlap--Alec's playing dom for Eliot, who's Nate's lover, while he's in a friends-with-benefits arrangement with Parker, who's also possibly kind of into Sophie (and vice versa).

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spiritcrow November 26 2009, 20:57:33 UTC
As I already said on Twitter - loved it! Was definitely worth the wait and torturing ;)

This literally *screams* for a sequel though, don't you think? Even more angsty, working out their (or actually just HER!) issues. Not that I'm trying to MAKE you write more Eliot/Sophie or anything *whistles* Who, me? ;)

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cuzimastripper November 26 2009, 21:44:37 UTC
Haha, of course not. I know you would *never* try to coerce me into doing such a thing xD

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