Title: Scald

[cuttlefish1]

Title: Scald
Rating: G
Author's notes: First outing in this fandom, and it's a painful little bit set at the end of Season Four's Box-cutter.

Comments

[hanfastolfe]

Nice! I like the use of present tense (which I got to like after reading the Hunger Games) and this look into Walt's head. :)

[cuttlefish1]

Thanks! I love how twisted this fandom is - it's a lot of fun to write for.

[hybrid_cookie]

Wow, this is amazing. I love it. It's so simple (in a good way) and I like the use of present tense, and I think you nailed the characters

[cuttlefish1]

Thank you very much! God damn it I love this fandom. :D

[sydpenguinbunny]

Ahhh :D Love it! You captured Walt's mental voice and state of mind perfectly. :D

[cuttlefish1]

Thanks very much!

[squonkfan]

Terrific--evocative, well-chosen bits of imagery for Walt's edgy brand of guilt. Nicely done!

[cuttlefish1]

Thank you! I'm so in love with the characters.

(Also, I have to say, I'm a bad fan and never commented, but I absolutely adore Weights and Measures. I read it just after I'd finished mainlining the whole series and read it with my head on fire. It's amazing and hot and twisted and yeah. <3)

[squonkfan]

You're welcome!

And thank you! ;) I'm so glad that "Weights and Measures" worked for you.

[bb8675309]

Really loved this one. I rarely comment and need to do so more often, but I have to say that I wish it was longer or was the start of a longer fic! But you've captured both Walt and Jesse magically. The present tense definitely keeps you more on the edge of your seat. You've captured both the sporadic nature of Jesse as well as his submission in a way to Walt. Can't wait to see more from you! Great introspection to Walt.

[cuttlefish1]

Thanks very much for the nice comment! Yeah, I hope very much to write some more for this fandom - just need to find the time, really! Thanks so much. :)