Fic: Tomates y Amor-- Chapter 2: Part of Your World

[cutthroatpixie]

Title: Tomates y Amor-- Chapter 2: Part of Your World
Author: cutthroatpixie
Character(s) or Pairing(s): (this chapter) Romano, Belgium, Fem!Spain. Overall fic will eventually be some form of Spain/Romano.
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Warnings: Human names. Ridiculousness.
Summary: Far, far away, beyond the borders of dreams and wishes, just past where fantasies

Comments

[counterheist]

The technical term for the feeling I'm feeling right now after reading this is a scream that can only be heard by dogs. Which is a good thing. Because it's the middle of the night. And my dog sleeps through everything anyway.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I LOVE Lovino here, and how he just lets her climb up there because why the fuck not, and how Antonia introduces herself and how Lovino has to be one of those call center people (does he get in shouting matches?), and the tomatoes, and they were both climbing at the same time, and their conversation and THE TENT FOR THE PLANTS

and the ending.

priceless

I cannot wait to see how the rest pans out. And how Lovina fits in. AND WHAT HAPPENS WHEN MAN SPAIN ARRIVES I really hope he crashes with Lovino too for the fuck of it.

Will Feliciano be making an appearance? I hope it's an embarrassing one.

Anyway.

<3

[cutthroatpixie]

You you you you're on yay ♥ I'm just glad my formatting worked fine and I'm glad you like this chapter!!!! I can tell because of the red blinking love.

Lovino totally gets in shouting matches, is there any other way to man a call centre hotline NO THERE IS NOT.

I can't figure out where I left my notebook right now but as soon as I find it the next chapter shall be in the works <3 <3 <3

[counterheist]

I'm attempting to finish something before sleep so yep!

"I'm just glad my formatting worked fine": looks fine enough to me! I think there're a couple paragraphs stuck together in the second section, though, if you mind the detail. And there was a sentence uncapitalized somewhere.

THE MORE YOU KNOW I GUESS

SUPER EXCITED RIGHT NOW. I HOPE YOU FIND IT SOON.

[cutthroatpixie]

Ooooooh what you finishing?

Ah fuck. I fixed the paragraphs that got stuck together, but I think I'll look at it again in the morning and make sure it is all okay. I had it all nice in Word but when I copypasted it got messed up >:

I HOPE I FIND IT TOO!!! BUT IT FEEL LIKE I SHOULD JUST LOOK FOR IT IN THE MORNING, I KEEP BEING FAIL ATM

[cutthroatpixie]

No prob, thanks for reading! <3