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cutothechase

Angsty Who Fic ftw

Jan 29, 2011 01:38

My first angst fic! And I'm not too thrilled with it and pretty much hate the ending, so I probs will revise soon enough. But in the meantime, didn't wanna keep you hanging <3

Title: It Hurts
Pairing: Jeith dealing with abusive Pete/Keith (Pete/John possibly implied)
Rating: R
Warning: angsty, rape, not happy!
Disclaimer: I do not own any members of The ( Read more... )

jeithford, the who, jeith, john entwistle, pete/john, pete/keith, keith moon, fanfic, pete townshend

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hippiechic1967 January 29 2011, 17:50:15 UTC

that was amazing! so emotional!!

cutothechase January 30 2011, 04:40:50 UTC

Aww thank you bb <3 The ending just needs a little work, I think. But so glad you like it! :D

hippiechic1967 January 30 2011, 15:38:22 UTC

i loved it, it was in a way bittersweet, because they were so close, and it showed a sad, less energetic side to keith, but then there was pete going SNAFU. the ending was good, with john going off to kill pete. ;)

cutothechase January 30 2011, 22:54:11 UTC

Awww, thank you! *hugs* XD You summarized it beautifully! <3

I guess I'll just post it to Who_Slash cuz honestly I'm sick of revising it XD It makes me feel all emo, lol

hippiechic1967 January 30 2011, 22:55:33 UTC

*hugs back* anytime, bb. ;)

postit!postit!postit! they'll eat it up! and don't catch pete's emo! :o

cutothechase January 30 2011, 23:11:32 UTC

eee! yayy, I WILL then! :D And muwahaha, tis too late >:D haha

hippiechic1967 January 30 2011, 23:13:21 UTC

teh emo!! XD
have fun posting!! :D hay, if you have time, wanna google docs?

cutothechase January 30 2011, 23:25:12 UTC

Yeah, that'd be awesome! I can for like 10ish min, then teh dinner. :(

But later I need to make a crazy 60s-men cover for my Vietnam War Class binder tonight so maybe you could help me spam some pics? :D (while we do google docs, I mean)

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