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Feb 18, 2008 13:47



Chapter six: Adam feeds Eve

When Lord Beckett entered the room it felt as if the entire Caribbean sun was focused inside. He had changed his clothes from blue to brown. His facial expression hadn’t changed: icy and amused.

She pushed herself up against the wall whipping the hair once again out of her face, watching him sitting down on a ( Read more... )

lord cutler beckett, author: ophelivia, beckett/original, original character

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ariei_delmonte February 19 2008, 07:46:09 UTC
Wonderful chapter! Although Nayeli seemed slightly out of character of how she was in previous chapter, but then again this might be totally in character for her. *shrugs* I don't know. She's your character, not mine.

Anywho, amazing work! I can't wait to see the next chapter!

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greeneyespurple February 19 2008, 13:52:26 UTC
Yeah, this is showing a different side of her. I think she struggles sometimes between her being the daughter of a 'cruel' or 'emotionless' person like Jones and the daughter of a 'lusting' Goddess. I suppose her mother's side showed this time. We will see...

You're way to kind to me! Thanks.

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