Song in Red & Gray Chapter 5 NOW WITH COVER ART

[ophelivia]

Title: Song in Red & Gray-Chapter Five: Kneeling
Author: ophelivia
Rating: R-NC17 for later chapters
Word Count: 557
Pairing: Beckett/OC
Characters: Beckett, OC. 
Summary: "Do just what I tell you and no one will get hurt."   A series of vignettes spanning both films.
Status: In-Progress
Disclaimer: I don't own the Pirates characters. Rose is mine, but I

Comments

[telera]

*fans self* Wow, that was HAWT! How deliciously wicked and intense! ^^ I love the tension you're able to convey in these vignettes, and the pleasure/pain combination becomes Beckett so well.
She wouldn’t have to limp home. *shivers*
He kissed her, got a taste of his own. Beckett tasting of strawberries is so sweet and hot! Yum! :D

[ophelivia]

You know somehow I knew you'd be the first to reply. Once again The Shell and the Snake was really, really helpful to this chapter so as usual thank you for being awesome.
Apperantly the thing with the strawberries is actually true.

[telera]

*blushes* Glad to be of help! But the merit is all yours- this story has your very personal touch, and it is perfect. ^^ BTW- something I forgot to mention-I simply *loved* this line: A portrait of the Virgin tacked on the cracked wall, pilfered from a book she stole from Beckett. That was great, my friend!

[lizzie_sparrow]

Oh! That was very nice. It is true, you learn something new everyday. =D

Beckett and strawberries always seemed to fit. I can't wait for the next chapter. <3

[ophelivia]

Ooh welcome back! Thanks.

[pink_siamese]

'He’d pull if she tried to pull away'. He'll what, sweetie? I think you might've left out a word here.

Not that it matters. Hot stuff, my friend. Hot stuff indeed. Clever inclusion of the strawberries. Liquor will do that, and so will mangoes.

'Unexpected really for such a small man to be so well sized.' This line reminds me of something someone said about Frank Sinatra (I'm paraphrasing):

"Yeah, Frank ran about a hundred twenty pounds. Not the biggest guy, but still. Sixty pounds of it was cock."

[pink_siamese]

Oh, wait, duh. Pull her hair?

[kittymay]

Great stuff, darling, great stuff. I can just hear our favourite snarkmaster saying all the smutty stuff! Heh!

[ophelivia]

I've read ALL your fics! So glad you like!

[ariei_delmonte]

This is awesome as always. I am loving it. The last part was my favorite.