there it goes

[cutecrazyice]

I'm new to this, so I really do appreciate honest opinions. Heh. I hope this is okay enough, for a first monthly-contest try. It's pretty rough. :)

Week 1 entry for October: Brigit's Flame
Prompt: Story starts with the sentence "There it goes."

Comments

[dawnie_gurl]

oh. dear. hell.

-

are you seriously telling me the little girl DIED?

-

this is gripping. you say it's rough, but it's already fine, in my opinion (and my honest one). the words flowed naturally, and that dream....oh, poor girl.

-

the father factor surprised me.

[cutecrazyice]

Thank you, Dawn! Lol, and it is rough. But I'm glad you like it, girl.

I'm not telling you if the girl died. Heh, that's for you to find out. :p

[dawnie_gurl]

you meanie.

-

you just like making me miserable, don't you?

-

hehe.

-

anyway, watcha doing? and how many days did you get this entry done?

[dawnie_gurl]

four hours? jesus, i am GLAD my college days are over!

-

in just one night????? i don't know how you pull that off, girl. where do your ideas come from?

-

i am relaxing. hehe. and kind of sleepy. if i don't reply, it means i am already asleep....lolz.

[cutecrazyice]

Hey, it's fun...NOT. :p

And my ideas come from my weird imagination. Go figure. Where do YOURS come from? (because your ff story is brilliant, girl)

...go to sleep!

[dawnie_gurl]

from my head, duh. haha!

-

ILU, CHRISTINE!

[cutecrazyice]

ILU back, Dawn! :)

[cutecrazyice]

Yeah, four hours studying. Lol. I don't know where the message went, sorry.