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bruises that won't heal (lost - miles, lara)

Feb 12, 2010 20:33

Title: Bruises That Won’t Heal
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairing: Lara/Dr. Chang, Miles
Rating: PG
Notes: 484 words. Written for fictionlost . Prompt: heartbreak.
( Miles is four when he asks who his daddy is. )

!fic, fandom: lost, fic: lost

Comments 9

cloudytea February 12 2010, 19:35:30 UTC

Very beautiful! Miles has quickly turned into one of my favourite characters. I love how you portrayed his mother and her animosity towards Dr. Chang after they were forced to evacuate. Again, very beautiful, keep up the amazing work. :)

cut_thestring February 12 2010, 22:10:51 UTC

Yes, Miles is one of my favourites as well! His mother wasn't exactly my favourite, but I wanted to flesh out a different part of her character. Thanks for reading! :-)

jemmalynette February 13 2010, 14:04:06 UTC

This was lovely. I love Miles too and I really enjoyed this. Loved how you described Miles thinking he reminds his mum of his father. Nice job! :)

cut_thestring February 13 2010, 21:42:18 UTC

Thanks for the feedback :-)

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cut_thestring February 13 2010, 23:43:05 UTC

Thanks! I totally agree - Miles is snarky now, think of what he was like as a child! :-P

gracklemar February 14 2010, 02:22:01 UTC

Very lovely!

cut_thestring February 14 2010, 03:52:05 UTC

Thanks for reading!

ciaimpala February 17 2010, 21:27:59 UTC

You really captured the characters so well here. The story rings really true within the Lost world.

cut_thestring February 18 2010, 09:45:14 UTC

Thanks, I try. :-P