Putting holes in happiness [CHAPTER 9]

May 05, 2013 14:25


Title: Putting holes in happiness
Chapter: 9/?
Genre: AU, Romance, Angst, friendship, smut.
Warnings: Angst. Alcohol.
Ratings: PG-13 to NC-17
Pairings: AoixKazuki. AoixUruha. Aoix?. Uruhax?. KazukixByou. KaixOC. Rukix?...Etc.
Disclaimer: I only own my imagination ♪
Synopsis: Some people have this tendency to destroy the best they have...When love is ( Read more... )

aoixuruha, angst, aoixkazuki, puttingholesinhappiness

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blacmeissa May 5 2013, 22:09:18 UTC
Yuu and his precious dick -__-

I bet Kai would have loved that blowjob indeed.
I love those two always fighting and bickering like two old ppl and they are so opposite....Kai sensible vs Yuu sexual innuendos xD

I died where he said was complaining about the toilet xDDD

Though another thing I liked about Kai and Yuu was how light hearted it started out and then it transitioned smoothly into a darker scenario involving Kouyou and from the jokes Yuu's feelings turned into genuine concern for him.

Yuu confuses me ...he likes Kouyou but his brutally honest speech makes it look like he doesn't know what he wants and I guess it is true but I like how he went to apologize to Kouyou.

Will not lie that part with Kazuki and Aoi from the past was heart breaking. IT just adds to what it seems on how Yuu views love and who he goes after with it.

Also Yuu grilling Mizuki about Kazuki was funny xD
From making fishes flop in my tummy last time this chapter had a lot of stuff to make me laugh and you mixed it well with the serious stuff.

On your last comment about them going to bed so soon. I guess that is one reason I like this story it is really spaced out xD

30 chaps...and we are now on 9 . TORRRTUREEEEEEEEEEEE D8<

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cursedhurricane May 5 2013, 22:57:56 UTC
DICK DICK DICK DICK ♥

That's what I like about their relation. They can be total children yet they know how to be serious at the same time. I'm kinda like this with my friends so^^
But I'm happy to see that a writer can give different characters different personalities. Such a relief lol.

(I'm writing without my glasses on so bear with the typos on this comment)

But Aoi doesn't know what he wants at all. He's totally facing a dilemma and wonders what to do to prevent anyone to be hurt and all. I wanted you all to understand how difficult it is for him by bringing the past into this chapter (and also to explain how quickly he and Kazuki became close).

Sometimes I spare angst for other chapters lmao. Na but really it's ok having fun too even with serious stories or topics^^

WAIT I think I got it. Yuu is in bed although the day isn't over because he didn't sleep the night before. When he leaves at the end of this chapter it's around 6pm or something. I'm sorry I forget to put time signs and such things ^^
But basically:
He left Yutaka's around noon.
He talked to Kouyou around 3 (after showering and all at his place) and when Kazuki is back it's around 4/5.

DO YOU GET IT NOW? XD It's in my brain and I tend to forget to notify my readers I feel so dumb now ;___;

TORTURE. You haven't suffered enough as a reader of my stories. This one will kill you all. You are warned. I had tweeted it a long time ago, that this one will make everyone hate meeeee ♥

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blacmeissa May 6 2013, 03:10:53 UTC
I TOLD YOU BEFORE I JUST CANNOT HATE YOU OK !!!!!!!

Noooo lol I explained to you what I meant by going to bed soon xD
but thanks for the time detail xD

I hope poor Yuu figures out soon so much ppl are already hurting including himself ;__;

That kind of relation is fun to have with friends......waityouhaveafriendthatshowedhisdickwhiledrunk?

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cursedhurricane May 6 2013, 10:52:21 UTC
EVERYBODY LOVES ME unless they are infatuated with some make up artist and hates me for getting 3 replies of him *flips table*

Well I had misunderstood obviously anyway u__u

But Yuu is such a nice person in fact. He used to be such an asshole in the past.

OMG LOL NOES XD
Though a female friends showed her tits and made us touch her boobs. That was so funny, every girl around going all "OMG YOUR BOOBS ARE PERFECT THEY LOOK LIKE YOU HAD A BOOB JOB OMGGGG SO TONED AND PRETTY BOOBS"
We were all pretty drunk haha.

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blacmeissa May 7 2013, 02:08:26 UTC
Omg that sounds like fun xD

Haters gonna hate <.<

I can see Yuu is nice and all of this drama is taking a toll on him :/ I really want to see how this fic will turn out.

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