Going Home (to a place we’ve never been before.) Chapter Four.

Mar 01, 2023 16:07

If this was a leap year I would have managed my aim of a chapter a month... I hope to get another one done before the end of March :)

Chapter Four; 'Grandmother Gull, and a night on the town, or maybe on the beach...'

This chapter is 2875 words long, rated 15, and was, as usual, beta-read by speakr2customrs

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returnverse, going home, fic

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noadvertising March 3 2023, 18:36:45 UTC
I love the mention of Elured and Elurin! And the not so chaste ending of the chapter. But most of all I love grandmother Gull- hillarious!

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curiouswombat March 3 2023, 19:55:19 UTC
Thank you. I thought those other twins must surely have been released from Mandos by now. And I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter end - and their name for Elwing :)

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engarian March 3 2023, 22:01:45 UTC
I love where you're taking this story, and what a delight to spend some time with Elwing - always one of my favorite characters.

- Erulisse (one L)

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curiouswombat March 4 2023, 09:21:56 UTC
Thank you :) I have come to like Elwing more, the more I think about her.

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epiphyta March 4 2023, 02:01:38 UTC
"Grandmother Gull", hee!

"that bird thing" - you ridiculous ellon, honestly.

The point about the Twins being descended from a Maia is one that's ignored in a lot of fic; you did well having Elwing bring it up here.

He really needed a hobbit to help him sort out all the possible relationships and complex genealogy. Perhaps Tharhîwon might be able to help, he thought with a smile.

Get a biiiiiiiig chalkboard. *g*

Maedhros searching for her brothers. *sniff*

Of course there's a sweepstakes pot.

Fishy noms are good for you, 'Ro!

the wine was good although a different style to that of home.

No, not home any more, he mentally corrected himself. The wine was not a style he had known in Middle Earth.Can I run off with that? It ties into my plottings ( ... )

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curiouswombat March 4 2023, 09:55:50 UTC
Grandmother Gull", hee!To be honest I'm surprised it hasn't occurred to anyone else before ( ... )

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