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If you have any concerns or comments on the way I roleplay comment here. This is for constructive criticism only. No "omg u suxxor gtfo". Anon is enabled, don't abuse that.

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anonymous December 4 2010, 23:43:18 UTC
I'm not sure if this is crit or what, but I notice you seem to always outright say when Vanille is lying, or what her real feelings really are. For those that play or have played FFXIII, we already know that about her. However there are many people who haven't played it, and this can be minor or major spoilers for her character just seeing that she's blatantly lying about who she is and what she's feeling.

I think you play her personality well and true to who she is but (and maybe it's just my opinion here so I hope you don't think it's a personal attack :( ) it feels like you're taking away at who she is in personality and overall character when straight from the start you basically tell everyone, "this isn't who she really is, it's a lie" it takes away from the subconscious development another character can have with her.

I hope this hasn't come off as TL;DR or snooty but its a small concern to see happening in almost all of her entries.

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curajas December 4 2010, 23:47:18 UTC
Hm. Alright, no, I don't think it's a bad way to say that to me. I'm actually going through canon again right now via walkthroughs to re-familiarize me with the canon. It's more of a habit on my part than anything and I'm really glad someone told me that.

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anonymous December 9 2010, 16:27:00 UTC
Love your characters in their many and varied ways. Love you.

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