Yaaaaay! Karl and Miranda say thanks so much for letting them shag.
Right. I'm divided. I was going to draw diagrams and post them to you, but then I decided that a-that was silly, and b-i don't have your address, and so instead I spent the early evening thinking (and, incidently, beta-ing Narnia fic, but that is neither here nor there).
1. I less than three you. 2. I've decided, that after Viggo goes away, and Karl sinks back into sleep, Miranda climbs back into bed and cuddles him. aww. I am a romantic at heart, shut up. (I keep rereading this point and smiling. I am terrible. OTP-heee) 3. How long has Miranda been a slasher? 4. It's a bit callous of her, isn't it? To decide that she has the right to give Karl away as a gift? And of course, I can see that he was happy to be given as a gift, but at the same time, it's a bit presumptious of her. 5. I love the Hobbit+Orli crowd. 6. Also "Mir did Vig." The simplicity of it. Cause that's the way gossip is, to me. 7. I love the idea of a 'hobbit schism.' hmm. Is a 'hobbit schism' a proper noun or not, and does it therefore require a capital 'h'? I am unsure. 8. I am thoroughly in love with part eight. (as an aside, Miranda makes phonecalls like me) 9. Ha ha Dave drinks Stella. 10. re: part fourteen: Karl's getting awfully forward isn't he? 11. Who's bloody cake is it? 12. Alright, I've reread it, making these notes, and I can't remember what I didn't like about it before, so blah.
Dude, next time, please draw the diagrams and I will give you my address, oh yes, because the idea just fills me with squee.
2. If it makes you happy, dear. *pets* *G* 3&4. 4 more than 3. I think I mentioned that this was the closest I've come to an "evil" Miranda. I have this sort of awe-filled regard for her. 5. They were entirely not intentional. Like, they were not in the plan. And then I wanted to bring in the gossip as an element, and Orli and Dom showed up, and the whole subplot just unravelled in front of me. 6. That's the way Orli gossips, at least. I like to think the make-up girls devoted hours of hissed giggling to the topic. *g* 7. It might require a capital, but Miranda's not going to dignify it with one, I think. *G* 8. Hee. (There was going to be more, it was, like, paragraphs long, and then I realised that was all I needed to make the point. Hail brevity.) 9. What's wrong with Stella? (Not my beer of choice, admittedly, but it comes in ahead of Crown, VB and Hahn.) 10. He's a sluuuuuut! *cough* 11. Mine all mine. OK, you can have some too. 12. Noooo! But I wanted to know! I kinda wanted to evoke mixed reactions, because this is a slightly malignant Miranda, and the situation is something of a dark, thwarted reflection of a usual slash scenario. Or something. I have pretensions. *G*
Well, if you want me to draw diagrams to fb you, you should RITE MOR OMG write more fic. 5. I love that the subplot got away from you. I don't know why. On the one hand, that's kind of wierd because they're your characters, you know? And on the other hand that's kind of cool. 6. I meant to say, I loved 'option c' or whatever it is, that had the makeup girls stumped for ten minutes. Also, do you think the makeup girls were forever making jokes about penis size compared to feet? 8. My love of this paragraph knows no bounds. 9. Stella's a bit wanky, at the same time as being, like, the VB of Belgium. In my head, it's like drinking Fosters. If a Belgian ever saw him drinking it, they'd slap him upside the head and tell him to stop being a freak. 10. Well, not as much as Orli is. 11. Huzzah! Is it chocolate? I like chocolate cake? 12. I will think on it. Perhaps the sleep will have done me good.
Right. I'm divided. I was going to draw diagrams and post them to you, but then I decided that a-that was silly, and b-i don't have your address, and so instead I spent the early evening thinking (and, incidently, beta-ing Narnia fic, but that is neither here nor there).
1. I less than three you.
2. I've decided, that after Viggo goes away, and Karl sinks back into sleep, Miranda climbs back into bed and cuddles him. aww. I am a romantic at heart, shut up. (I keep rereading this point and smiling. I am terrible. OTP-heee)
3. How long has Miranda been a slasher?
4. It's a bit callous of her, isn't it? To decide that she has the right to give Karl away as a gift? And of course, I can see that he was happy to be given as a gift, but at the same time, it's a bit presumptious of her.
5. I love the Hobbit+Orli crowd.
6. Also "Mir did Vig." The simplicity of it. Cause that's the way gossip is, to me.
7. I love the idea of a 'hobbit schism.' hmm. Is a 'hobbit schism' a proper noun or not, and does it therefore require a capital 'h'? I am unsure.
8. I am thoroughly in love with part eight. (as an aside, Miranda makes phonecalls like me)
9. Ha ha Dave drinks Stella.
10. re: part fourteen: Karl's getting awfully forward isn't he?
11. Who's bloody cake is it?
12. Alright, I've reread it, making these notes, and I can't remember what I didn't like about it before, so blah.
The End.
I should stop rambling now, or something.
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2. If it makes you happy, dear. *pets* *G*
3&4. 4 more than 3. I think I mentioned that this was the closest I've come to an "evil" Miranda. I have this sort of awe-filled regard for her.
5. They were entirely not intentional. Like, they were not in the plan. And then I wanted to bring in the gossip as an element, and Orli and Dom showed up, and the whole subplot just unravelled in front of me.
6. That's the way Orli gossips, at least. I like to think the make-up girls devoted hours of hissed giggling to the topic. *g*
7. It might require a capital, but Miranda's not going to dignify it with one, I think. *G*
8. Hee. (There was going to be more, it was, like, paragraphs long, and then I realised that was all I needed to make the point. Hail brevity.)
9. What's wrong with Stella? (Not my beer of choice, admittedly, but it comes in ahead of Crown, VB and Hahn.)
10. He's a sluuuuuut! *cough*
11. Mine all mine. OK, you can have some too.
12. Noooo! But I wanted to know! I kinda wanted to evoke mixed reactions, because this is a slightly malignant Miranda, and the situation is something of a dark, thwarted reflection of a usual slash scenario. Or something. I have pretensions. *G*
Oh, and 1. I less than three you too!
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5. I love that the subplot got away from you. I don't know why. On the one hand, that's kind of wierd because they're your characters, you know? And on the other hand that's kind of cool.
6. I meant to say, I loved 'option c' or whatever it is, that had the makeup girls stumped for ten minutes. Also, do you think the makeup girls were forever making jokes about penis size compared to feet?
8. My love of this paragraph knows no bounds.
9. Stella's a bit wanky, at the same time as being, like, the VB of Belgium. In my head, it's like drinking Fosters. If a Belgian ever saw him drinking it, they'd slap him upside the head and tell him to stop being a freak.
10. Well, not as much as Orli is.
11. Huzzah! Is it chocolate? I like chocolate cake?
12. I will think on it. Perhaps the sleep will have done me good.
But for now, breakfast.
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