Those Two Boys - oneshot

[culturegeek76]

Title: Those Two Boys
Author: culturegeek76
Rating: G
Summary: A woman remembers the Winchester boys from way back, and there’s no real plot to speak of. It’s a PWP without the pr0n.
Warning: None really. You might think it’s weird and not like it. It’s written from the POV of an OC.
Disclaimer: Sam and Dean belong to a corporate power that is kind

Comments

[missyjack]

I am kinda in love with external POVs on the Wnchesters at present. I really enjoyed this piece; there is a lovely rhythm to it.

[culturegeek76]

Thank you.
I felt good when I wrote this - it just came out in one rush. (If only writing school papers were so easy.)

[kimonkey7]

This is a really sweet little piece. POV didn't bother me at all. It's nice to see an outsider's impression of the family we love so much, knowing they would be THE family every neighborhood has...and aren't those boys always the ones we girls watched closest? I know I did.

Thanks.

[culturegeek76]

Sadly, they'd probably be "THE family" in every single neighborhood they've ever lived in. That's a lot of enthralled little girls.... ;)

[eloise_bright]

I loved this. The outsider's POV was just right, and made me think of how I feel about Dean. Yep, I think my tummy would have done flipflops too.

Love the wee scene with them coming home after a hunt. That was perfect Winchester characterization.

Well done!

[culturegeek76]

I'm glad you liked it. The coming home scene was actually the first idea I got for this.
Ah, tummy flipflops. I just don't get them that much anymore, but I'm sure seeing Dean would definitely do it!
Thanks.

[lady_octavia]

Very cool, a neat idea and a great peak at the boys world.

[culturegeek76]

Thanks!
PS - love the icon. V. cute!

[lady_octavia]

It is one of carmendove's wonderful creations.

[culturegeek76]

thank you. Glad you liked it.