Exclusive [One Piece (AU), Zoro/Sanji] Part B

Aug 27, 2009 16:14

Usually, Sanji took great delight in taking out the penis mold.

“Happy to see me?” He asked, poking the mold absentmindedly. “Hm?”

“He’s talking to the dick again,” Patty said in a sing-song voice.

“Talking to it helps it grow,” Carne said with a snort.

Sanji ignored them and poked it again.

Nothing. No delight. No mirth. He ( Read more... )

zeff, patty & carne, zosan, chopper, kuro, franky x robin, mihawk, paula, johnny & yosaku, one piece, zoro x sanji, luffy x vivi, buggy, nasopp

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salmon_pink December 18 2010, 17:26:45 UTC
Oh, so very lovely. So very, very lovely. I adored this version of Sanji and Zoro because they were still themselves, completely themselves, but they were also more real-life, if that makes sense. All the anger that came from them being thrown together in the series was so beautifully transformed into passion from them growing into a couple naturally here, all that instinctively habitual bickering in the series became affectionate banter and teasing here. I don't think I'm doing a good job of articulating myself here, but I just mean that you created a Zoro and a Sanji that fit this AU but they were still the Zoro and the Sanji I know from the manga.

I could try and list every brilliant little moment that made me smile giddily or plain crack up, but I'd be here all night. So, quick list - Buggy and his doomed attempts to get some sweet Zoro ass, Mihawk and the magnificent mental picture of him wearing that silky woman's robe, Vivi's adorable crush, the way you described Robin's smile at the end, Sanji's nicotine gum, Zeff's deadpan reaction to Zoro showing up, Buggy's deviousness with the phone, NNRGH EVERYTHING!!

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cuethe_pulse December 18 2010, 19:39:21 UTC
YOUR COMPLIMENTS DO NOT MAKE ME HAPPY AT ALL.

except that they do. ♥♥♥ This is actually one of my favorite fics that I've written, so knowing people really enjoy it makes me extremely happy. :D

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