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[feyrain]

title : n/a ?
prompt : a sunset can't save you now
time : 34 min (gah overshot)
notes : A sunset can't save her now from the beauty of things... (the very end of this story-idea/novel/thing...)(Hope this didn't come off as Mary-Sueish. -_-'' )

Comments

[tsuki_no_bara]

this is lovely, evocative and strange. (and admittedly the memory of simon walking into walls made me giggle.)

[applegnat]

Wow, the atmosphere is so rich and strange, solid and heavy and yet ephemeral. You have a gift, m' dear. The formatting made it a bit hard to get through, for me, butit was totally worth it!