Bold and Young (for prompt 54)
Prompt: #54
Author: ANONYMOUS until reveals
Title: Bold and Young
Rating: NC-17
Other pairings involved: Chen/Xiumin, Baekhyun/Kyungsoo
Length: 13,091 words
Summary: Joonmyun is a quiet, unassuming piano teacher who has a one night stand with a handsome, pink haired boy he meets at a club.
Warnings: Do I need to warn for classical music and ( Read more... )
Author: ANONYMOUS until reveals
Title: Bold and Young
Rating: NC-17
Other pairings involved: Chen/Xiumin, Baekhyun/Kyungsoo
Length: 13,091 words
Summary: Joonmyun is a quiet, unassuming piano teacher who has a one night stand with a handsome, pink haired boy he meets at a club.
Warnings: Do I need to warn for classical music and ( Read more... )
(and pink-haired jongin is my kind of jongin. also he sounds super pretty, bathed in pink and purple club light)
"Someone that attractive has to be a dick, right?"
i laughed. for reasons ;)
;_; poor self-deprecating joonmyun ;_; you are not a nerd and he will like you ok
omg jongin helping joonmyun avoid minho. he's SO CLOSE. also how kind of him to kiss him to avoid talking to strangers (joonmyun. joonmyun. you're talking to a stranger anyway)
bless jongdae for being concerned even though he tried to hook joonmyun up with an accountant and tried to shout at joonmyun all through that kiss
BLESS JONGDAE FOR SAFE SEX TIPS
"i'm anything but sexy"
"denied"
BLESS JONGIN he gets it
OKAY IF YOU HADN'T BEFORE, YOU WON ME OVER I LOVE CHOPIN I WENT TO SEE HIS TOMB IN PÈRE LACHAISE is that creepy i'm sorry but seriously i love chopin ;_; (his tomb is beautiful) (sings at you)
well who knew piano playing = boners i did not know but good on you joonmyun good on you
"play for me joonmyun"
omg i keep reading this as "come for me joonmyun" it feels very appropriate
omg jongin he can't play if you keep distracting him WITH HIS DICK
ooh off goes his shirt
"still, just tell me to stop and i will"
BLESS JONGIN, HE GETS IT
"so pretty"
/eyes ;)
"suddenly, it feels like the metronome is ticking at 60 beats a minute"
breaking my train of commenting on text to say this is honestly the best metaphor for orgasms i have ever seen??? seriously so good and so beautiful
joonmyun just staring at jongin :D
"suddenly it's not so awkward having breakfast with someone who's only wearing borrowed boxer shorts"
kkkkkkk :D
"that's not very fair to you"
JONGIN GETS IT
"It's not that you can't dance. You're just...inhibited. I could show you how to let go. If you let me, I mean."
innuendo, i c u
"his mind is flooded with images of all the things they'd done the night before"
so does joonmyun ;)
"they have a girl band obsession"
hey now :P nothing wrong with a girl band obsession ;)
"Joonmyun would have been freaking out too if he’d found himself stuck with an irate Kyungsoo, in a car going nowhere"
wouldn't we all tbh he's absolutely terrifying
"he looks devastating"
i cry tbh
joonmyun you are not boring with brown hair you are gorgeous you little sad self-deprecating beautiful thing
the fact he was able to just get a hairdresser though lol he must be magic, i wish i could get one instantly :P
omg chanyeol as the hairdresser. i never knew i wanted hairdresser!chanyeol but apparently i did. you have realised a dream i didn't even know i had. also chanyeol with electric blue hair. i can totally cope with this
"I think the wine red or mahogany would be gr-"
i support chanyeol's excellent taste in hair colour
how can you not like für elise it's like one of the only things i can play lmao it's so simple and pretty joonmyun you're losing piano points w/ me you gained by liking chopin and pink hair
but ok hannah hammering at the keys probably won't make it very nice
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can i have some hotteok
joyrene ♥
well hello magically conveniently appearing florist jongin
have i ever mentioned that i like florist!au and pink haired florist jongin sounds adorable????
"Joonmyun finds himself smiling because the idea of a guy working with flowers is kind of romantic and he's always been a little susceptible to cheese"
i can tell, bless ♥
"you're beautiful-change, or no change"
flatterer :P
omg the wind blew away his note
fuck the wind
omg if jongin had gone to joonmyun's house and joonmyun had gone to the club....would they have missed each other, or would joonmyun have come back as jongin had given up and was starting to head home? different day, different fic
"can I hug you?"
blessssss
OH MY GOD JONGIN'S UMMA
SHE WANTED THEM TO GO OUT ON A DATE TOGETHER
BLESS JONGIN'S UMMA SHE HAD IT ALL SUSSED BEFORE THEY EVEN MET
jongin's umma has good taste in boys for her son
"you’re both so uncooperative"
omg yes i agree umma
"will they do well in public with all their clothes on?"
these million-dollar questions
omg jongin's note awwwwww
OMG JONGIN PLAYS PIANO lying by omission is still lying jongin even if you think otherwise. little brat :P
"you raised the metronome so i'd move faster"
ok i paraphrased that one BUT I LAUGHED that bit was hilarious and yet beautiful and moving???? i still like that metaphor
"i was keeping to the tempo too"
still a brat though :P
"I'm a piano teacher too"
YOU'RE EVIL KIM JONGIN EVIL
"It was the best way I could come up with to get you on my lap"
oh my god lol this line
"we could play duets together"
weren't you already doing that badum tss
"I wonder if we could play a duet with you on my lap?"
different kind of duet kim jongin
"can i stay the night?"
would you like to stay forever????
well that was adorable
all fluffy
yet chill
it wasn't overly sweet? it was just the right kind of pacing
ngl at the beginning i wondered how it was going to take 13k bc it was like "hi jongin get your kit off" but it worked??? the pacing was nice and it was sweet and i'm happy ♥
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