Jul 08, 2008 07:21
Hi,
If this is not aloud please feel free to delete :-D
I have started writing a CSI: Miami fic including the pairing Eric/Ryan and Tim/OFC. The summary of the fic is that Horatio has a daughter who he adopted when she was 9. She became engaged to Tim in her later years.When Tim died she changed dramatically. She has just come back from being undercover for a year and starts to surprisingly gets on really well with Ryan. There is a lot more than that
I would be looking for someone to check my grammar and punctuation, characterization and the basic progress of the story. I sometimes ramble on about certain points or just jump ahead.
If you think you would be able to beta for me please send me a message as I would really would appreciate it.
Thanks for your time.
Harknessgirl