THE LOVE SLAVE ~ CHAPTER 1

[csd1]

     Police cars, lights flashing, surrounded the modest apartment building.   Vicki Nelson walked quickly up the stairs to the second floor seeing  uniformed officers and detectives were everywhere, some taking pictures, some shining flashlights along the floor

Comments

[longlostnite]

ACK! I love it! Great dialogue, you captured the voices of everybody just spot on! Now, where's Chapter 2? But no pressure!

[csd1]

It's cumming! Mikey having fun!

[juliaaurelia]

Our Henry's hungry AND horny? We can't have that--if Vicki won't take care of it, I will, LOL! Looking forward to finding out what the Valkyrie *really* wants from Mike, besides sex.

[csd1]

Stand in line! We ALL want to be the one who FEEDS him! LOL. Tomorrow is Mike.

Oh Snap!!

[sindee1982]

One thing about Henry: he sure does have the most interesting and ecclectic set of friends I've ever clapped an eye to! This is really starting to get good :)

Re: Oh Snap!!

[csd1]

Henry has gotten around hasn't he? More hopefully today.

[neeceera]

It says Uh Oh? You might want to move back we're about to have company. Who summoned me? He did. This part made me crack up. Aparantly Henry isn't on good terms with Freya. A lovers tiff perhaps? This is really good can't wait for more. Denise

[csd1]

You always pick out my favs too. I hope to have the next up today. Chap 2 will be what is happening to Mike.

[ravenboo]

OHHH, liking this a lot !!! :D

[csd1]

Thanks Boo. Look later today to see if I get the next chap up.

[ravenboo]

OOOH !!!, I hope so :D

[csd1]

It's up now. Make sure you don't fall over! I think I outdid myself on it.