HPFiclet: One Moment In Time [RB/SB]

[cs_whitewolf]

I’m not quite sure as to what I was trying to achieve here with this piece, or even if I’ve managed to achieve anything it at all. But it’s an odd sort of flowery(?), smutty(?)... thing. If you take the time to read it, please comment- I kind of like it myself.

Comments

[aurora_enkeli]

Huzzah! Cestyness. Tasty Cestyness.

[cs_whitewolf]

Guess I needn't have worried about the prose at all then? Though I don't think I'll be hurrying to try the same style anytime soon... it's, well, odd really. :)

Kisses,
Caspe

[spessartine]

Yum.

a light cerise as dawn light touches his naked chest- rising, falling, breathes slowing and evening out as they lie- entwined, together, sated sleep claiming them.

Loved that - in fact the whole thing, but the last prargraph is especially nice. Good stuff :)

[cs_whitewolf]

Thanks! :) It was fun to write if anything else. I quite liked the beginning myself, the second sentence at least, it's what spawned this whole style/piece. Ta for reading!

Peace,
Caspe

[bouncy]

This is so stunning, Caspe. Really really brilliant. I love it. You have to write more of this pairing. Much more.

[cs_whitewolf]

Oh I will definitly be writing more blackcest, and that's a promise- it is just so delicious! Thanks for reading, Cici!

Peace,
Caspe

[the_senjou]

I like how sensual this was. I felt a little dizzy reading it, as though I too were half-asleep and feeling my way. lovely;)

[cs_whitewolf]

Thanks for reading, Senjy ::hugs:: I wouldn't say I felt 'dizzy' when writing it, but I certainly felt weird, what with the floaty feelings and all :)

Peace,
Wolfy