TWFanFic: Uniformed Man [Jack/Jack]

[cs_whitewolf]

Title: Uniformed Man

On Website: beyond-redemption.net

Rating(s): R/18-Rated

Pairing(s): Jack Harkness/Jack Harkness (“James Harper”)

Summary: Unbetad. James finds the sight of Jack in his uniform truly irresistible.

Word Count: 1210words.

Dedication: For gauky_1976, who pestered me into writing a longer (and, ahem, more detailed) version of my uniform

Comments

[gauky_1976]

Uhh...Guh...

Very hot and well worth the wait!!

Will write more when I can string more than two words together and am not drowning in a pool of drool!!

[gauky_1976]

Just a small nit-pick though..

James paused only slightly, flicking his eyes forward to see James’ expression in the mirror.

Should that read Jack's expression in the mirror??

[cs_whitewolf]

Woah, I'm actually impressed it was James' name I cocked up XD I kept writing "Jack did this to Jack erm, James" and had to go back and edit most of it, lol.

Thanks for pointing it out. It's all fixed now :)

[cs_whitewolf]

I found myself stalling on this piece as I was feeling somewhat rusty when it came to writing the higher rating- so-so pleased to hear that it's worked out okay for you :D and that you enjoyed it!

::pets the pile of goo::
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

[gauky_1976]

You are aware of the fact that I will now expect lots of writing from you now....aren't you??

[cs_whitewolf]

XD I guessed as much! Just don't expect me to work to a deadline, haha.

::smishes::

[gauky_1976]

Write like that and you can take as long as you darn well like!! :P

[cs_whitewolf]

Heh. Well if you approve so much I suppose I'm open for suggestions ;)

...hey, I get fic now from you, don't I?? :D

[gauky_1976]

Yes you do...well at least the next 3 chapters as I haven't had a chance to do anymore on it.

Will post them when I get a chance...which will hopefully be sometime this week (but no promises).

*Skips off to the video store to pick up her brand new Torchwood DVD's :D*

[cs_whitewolf]

Hey...! ::wonders back a month later::

You never did post your story did you??? :o