TWFanFic: Sinnerman [Jack/Ianto]

[cs_whitewolf]

Title: Sinnerman
Author: CS_WhiteWolf
On Website: beyond-redemption.net
Beta(s): Many thanks to cyberamanda for the fantastic beta!
Rating(s): R/18-Rated [NC-17]
Pairing(s): Jack Harkness/Ianto Jones.
Warning(s): Sexual Situations; Dubious Consent Non-Con/Rape; Violence.
Word Count: 3634words.
Summary: A confrontation between Jack and Ianto becomes a battle

Comments

[gemstar69]

Halfway through. Can't speak. Fainting. You are totally delivering and I bow to you. Evil!Jack is almost as hot as John Barrowman's shirt can't believe I mentioned the shirt again and sjvnfdkjn;fnfj

Don't know what else to say, other than it's fucking great.

Trying to read it slowly, make it last, ya know? Yeah.

And OMG I have a decdication? I couldn't luff you more if I tried :)

[gemstar69]

Have finished.

*IZ SO TOTALLY MORE DED THAN... A REALLY DED THING*

Fuck-hing hellll. You did good.

[cs_whitewolf]

Thanks so much, gem! I really am so smiley over the fact that you liked this. And thank you for all your encouragement towards getting this done, turned out all the better because of it I'm sure!

Peace,
Caspe

[cs_whitewolf]

There is always room to mention ze shirt!

And course you got a dedication, you deserve that and lots more for being so encouraging! Course when you were first readig the excerpts I really thought this would end... er, 'happier'. My bad. Still Evil!Jack really is love.

::squishes you tight::

[gemstar69]

Aww, you're so sweet. Happier? Don't go Hollywood! Somethings have to end badly and I think evil!Jack is so much more interesting to read. I mean, I love happy Jack, protective Jack and really bloody adorable Jack, but there's something about the element of danger, about a bad boy that really sends my pulse racing. And I really don't think you're any different, which is good XD

Yay for occasional non-conformative Jack sex!

*squishes you more*

I had a squee attack about his shirt today with my mate who I didn't know adores JB as much as we do

[cs_whitewolf]

Well not happy-hollywood style! Just lots of agressive yumminess. But hey, if you found the non con just as yummy then I am appropriately satisfied! I love 'torturing' my characters so, it's great fun if a little draining at times!

My next project: Male Pregnancy. XD hahaha.

Zomg you have people out of fandom you can squee with?! You SUCK. :( No one my end shares my obsessiveness. I was trying to get out my love for the red shirt at work the day after and one of the girls was all like 'you actually like him!?' and I was all 'O_o zomg so affronted right now!'

[gemstar69]

Male pregnancy? *lolz* It would have to be Ianto who gets up the duff though coz Jack's being really careful not to let that happen again XO

Whenever I gush about him to new people they're always leik, 'You do know he's gay, right?' And I'm leik, 'So? I'd still give him one. Or twenty.' And then there's squeeing and such like.

Lolz, I was just writing my fic and Jack goes, 'Woah', in a really serious scene when Rose practically passes out on him, and I accidently wrote him as saying, 'Leik, Woah'. Now I'm loling and finding it hard to take out :(

[cs_whitewolf]

Yeah it's Ianto who gets to suffer the abuse of pregnancy XD he's such a woobie! ::glomps him::

Zomg you MUST keep that 'leik, woah' line in! I'm cackling at the very thought of it! Though if it's a serious scene it could be a tad bitty inapropriate... ho-humm... (I'd leave it in anyway, for the lolz ;D)

I hate how people always jump straight to the 'he's gay' part, LIKE I CARE! He's too damn pretty, gay or not, not to fancy the red shirt pants off of him. I mean really!

[gemstar69]

Okay, this is how it would go if I kept the 'Leik, woah,' line in it:

“Jack, I’m okay, I think I can walk,” she mumbles, so he lets go, but her legs aren’t there anymore and Rose half drops before he can catch her.

“No, you can’t.” He loosens his grip a little to let her stand properly and she stumbles against him, grabbing at his coat sleeve as she falls.

“Leik, woah,” he breathes, grabbing her again and this time he tries to pick her up.

I cannot use 'Leik, Woah'. If it were a crackfic then yes. BUT NO. even thought it would be awesome

[cs_whitewolf]

But it fits so *perfectly*! lmao. Okay, so maybe not, but dang that line is already so much love. At least when you post it up I'll know what you really meant ;)

How much of this fic have you got written?

[gemstar69]

Well, I thought I had it all sorted a few days ago, but then I was watching countrycide and it spurred an 'omg Rose is hurt scene' and I had to scribble away like a mad thing. Half of it is still in note form but I've got *checks* 2741 words written in MicWord at the moment. It's turning into quite an epic.

[cs_whitewolf]

I love when ideas do that, though it can get a little frustrating at times too. That's a pretty decent amount, I can't wait till you start posting. Are you going for a one off or a chaptered fic?

[gemstar69]

I don't know. I think I might do it all in one. I'm almost finished writing this bit with Owen, Jack and Rose (teh stabbing, OH NOES!), do you want me to email it to you?

[cs_whitewolf]

Yeah, send it on over! ::is excited::

(Probably won't reply about it till some point tomorrow as have just been trying to get to sleep for the last hour, am only up now coz my mother decided to let her damn dogs play with their squeeky toys. She had the cheek to tell me to close my door. I am beyond furious right now.)

[gemstar69]

K, I sent it. Am a little nervous, so I made a new icon ^^^

[cs_whitewolf]

You make icons when you get nervous? ...how very, interesting ;)

(Will check for email now!)