Wow that was a great story it was intense and very sexy I liked it please share more story's like that you kept me in suspense every moment thanx for sharing
Thank you. I forgot to mention that I hadn't proof-read it prior to posting. If you noticed any errors, please feel free to point them out.
I worried that it wouldn't sound like Dean because I was concentrating so much on the non-verbal parts. When he spoke, I wanted it to sound like him.
What's fic rec? Thank you again for your kind comments. Like I said, this is my very first fanfic and only the 2nd story I've ever written. And I've never showed my writing to anyone.
The biggest thing you should work on is dialogue punctuation. The way you have it right now is grammatically incorrrect. A google search will reveal a ton of sites that describe how to do it correctly.
The other thing is that the story isn't really "Very NC-17" That description is usually saved for things like rape, BDSM and etc. A simple NC-17 or Hard R is more fitting.
wow that was really hot *fans self* I really liked Reagan! I could definitely see Dean in the story! Great job especially for your first fanfic! Awesome!
Hello! This story of mine that I wrote a long time ago which you enjoyed...well, I just thought you might like to know that I've written a sequel (my first attempt at a multi-chapter). It's called What Are The Chances? and you can find it on my journal if you're interested. :)
Yum! If I didn't want Dean before (which I DID), I do now. Sigh, if only I could be Reagan. Great little gem of a fic you have here, steamy, but filled with personality and depth of characters. It flows well, it feels natural within my head as I read it, and the exchange between Reagan and Dean was intense and well done. Thank you for sharing!
Hi! :) This story of mine that I wrote a long time ago which you enjoyed...well, I just thought you might like to know that I've written a sequel (my first attempt at a multi-chapter). It's called What Are The Chances? and you can find it on my journal if you're interested. :)
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So Dean-ish.
Adding to my next fic rec:D
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I worried that it wouldn't sound like Dean because I was concentrating so much on the non-verbal parts. When he spoke, I wanted it to sound like him.
What's fic rec? Thank you again for your kind comments. Like I said, this is my very first fanfic and only the 2nd story I've ever written. And I've never showed my writing to anyone.
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Fic recs are the reccomended fictions.
*hugs*
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The other thing is that the story isn't really "Very NC-17" That description is usually saved for things like rape, BDSM and etc. A simple NC-17 or Hard R is more fitting.
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I so shouldn't have read it at work, lol
I think you should definitely bring Reagan back.. She's a good character!
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Girl, I turned myself on visualizing Dean as I was writing it! *fans self*
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hhmm.. hot sweaty Dean... rawr!
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