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[fic] "At the very ports we blow" (Gen, Hei+Ed, PG)

Jul 08, 2007 13:17

Title: At the very ports we blow (part 1 of 4)
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: None (gen)
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: For 7stages, set 3, #2: "effect of impact on stationary objects"
Warnings: Post-series, pre-movie
Author's notes: Special thanks to sky_dark, without whom this fic would not in 23092309283 years ever existed. Posting Part 1 of 2 now, part 2 to come tomorrow cause a ( Read more... )

fma, fanfic, hyde, pg-13, fic, heied, gen

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jenioctavia July 9 2007, 05:42:50 UTC

I...promise a more coherent and longer comment when I'm not so dead tired. But seriously. Love this. Want more. NEED MORE.

cryogenia July 9 2007, 23:59:17 UTC

<3 Thanks for at least letting me know you're out there :) I will try to post more asap.

jenioctavia July 10 2007, 00:03:32 UTC

Yay!
Okay, more coherent:
zomg.
Seriously, when I started reading (and before, when you were talking about it), I had my doubts. Picturing Hei as 'arrogant' in any manner was just really hard to wrap my mind around (unless it was Heivy. XD), and I almost thought that maybe it wasn't going to be that great.
You totally, absolutely proved me wrong.
By the end of that, -I- wanted to hit him for being such a jerk! But at the same time you were able to paint Ed in such a light that his actions weren't quite justified simply by his own attitude towards things. I really cannot wait to see what comes of this. It. Is. Awesome. x)

*squeal*
You turn me in to such a fangirl. XD;

cryogenia July 10 2007, 06:13:25 UTC

<33 Thanks. Yeah, I figured Alfons as "arrogant" was going to be a hard sell, considering how he is in canon - but well, if you think about it, a 15 year old boy genius probably DOES have his moments of being utterly arrogant XD; And Ed is of course, as you so astutely noted, a biased observer...we're seeing through his eyes, but is the information we're getting entirely accurate? Mwahahaha...

*goes to finish next part*

jenioctavia July 10 2007, 23:04:29 UTC

True, true. And he does have a RIGHT to be arrogant, given how damn smart he is.
Not only is Ed a biased observer, he also has a tenancy to bring some of the behavior that others give him on himself.
So really, how much of that was also HIS FAULT?
YAYMORE! <333 *showers with love*

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