[Fic] "Through a Nightmare, Darkly" (Eckart/Ed, NC-17)

May 12, 2006 19:57

Title: Through a Nightmare, Darkly
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: Eckart/Ed
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Movie (duh)
Warnings: NONCON (this means rape!)
A/N: For fma_fuh_q <3 Also, Eckart's little dedication in the middle is credit to Margaret Weis/Tracy Hickman's Deathgate Cycle (Elven Star). I am not awesome enough to come up with that myself XD

i mingle with the gods, i mingle with divinity )

fma_fuh_q, fanfic, noncon, smut, eckart/ed, nc-17

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jantra May 13 2006, 14:13:18 UTC
That was amazing Cryo! Just... wow! You ... wow. ^^; Expertly played out and the ending, perfect.

There's a slight weird repeat near the middle of the fic.

She continued to mouth him for several long moments, tugged at his balls when she felt he was lagging. The audience made little appreciative sighs from time to time, until she finally pulled her head away and glared. She was not a harlot, she did not enjoy this depravity…HE was the pervert reacting so wantonly.

That got a solid reaction, at last; his head flew back and he gasped, shoved himself even further down her throat. She choked on the intrusion and pulled her head back in a hurry, forced herself not to bite. He had swollen visibly again though, and when she stroked him she could tell he was fighting not to thrust back. Much better. She pressed her lips against him again and licked, murmured as if she were enjoying herself, and his flesh sprang to life beneath her lips.

She continued to mouth him for several long moments, tugged at his balls when she felt he was lagging. The audience made little appreciative sighs from time to time, until she finally pulled her head away and glared. She was not a harlot, she did not enjoy this depravity...HE was the pervert reacting so wantonly. Alright, perhaps she did like wresting noises from his lips. The shaky whimpers served to underscore her dominance, her importance.

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