[Fic] "Do Not Disturb", Part 3 (Hei/Ed, NC-17)

[cryogenia]

Title: Do Not Disturb
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: Edward Elric/Alfons Heiderich
Rating: NC-17
A/N: For fma_fuh_q. Warnings for fluff, sap (and omfg, since when did Hei/Ed become a fluffy pairing, anyway? O.o; Clearly this means I am the best forever.) But! At least this part is the pay-off XD;

Part 1
Part 2

Comments

[elfinragdoll]

Oh, this was simply lovely. Your Hei/Ed fics always carry a certain kind of sentiment that makes me hope that when I see the movie,(finally) their Hei will measure up to yours.

Much loves, dear. *huggles the Cryo queen*

[cryogenia]

f^^; Well, I wouldn't hold your breath about the movie, uh...they tried to do so much with one movie that the actual development kinda got shafted. So I'm sure the movie writers didn't mean for Hei to be so slashtastic, but uh, since they kinda forgot to explain why he's so attached to Ed...it really came off to me as "INSANE CRUSH OMFG" :)

[heerodiscarded]

Don't stop~~~

Just keep making part 4, 5, 300... *Coughs*

I cannot get enough of your writing. Ever.
There's just something about the way everything -feels-.

It's more realistic than so many fictions out there, with Hei's guilt and worry...his mulling the consequences all while Edward is trying to, as per the norm, get what he wants in a backwards methodology laden with embarrassment without ever -asking-.

Much love.

[elfinragdoll]

XDDDD!!! Yeah, from what I hear, your parody had more logic to their relationship than the movie did...so, why IS he so attatched to him? Becuase he's his own brother's alter, right? (forgive me, it's early, and I'm dense)

Everyone's like, "don't waste your time with the movie", but hey, this is my fave obsession now, and I'll see it through, I'm the only one who decideds if it was entertaining to me or not.

But I shrug....right now, just waiting for more Pandora-ness!

[cryogenia]

Well, so the movie doesn't really explain it XD I think the assumption is, we're supposed to just know that Alfons is attached to Ed cause he's an Elric...or something. But the end effect is, any time Ed mentions leaving, or Ed is sad, or whatever, Alfons gets TOTALLY EMO, above and beyond what one would think a normal roommate would XD And then in the end...well, I won't spoil it, but suffice it to say the two of them are just totally slashtastic (albeit in a rather one-sided Alfons->Ed way) XD

[elfinragdoll]

And slashtastic is the new word of the day. I'm totally spreading it around my workplace. But thanks for not spoiling it for me (what little isn't already XD!) And woes, for I'm having all these petty little issues getting ahold of it in the first place...a coworker suggested something called 'bit torrent' since limewire's giving me nothing but crap...any suggestions, love?