(Before I start, just wanna fanboy for a moment....HOLY TITS, I LOVE THAT YOU WORKED CRY INTO THIS STORY!!! WHY GOD, WHY? WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THIS??)
Ahem.
Loved, loved, loved the descriptions. Thought I was reading a manga (with pics and such) instead of a fic. I swear I was sitting at that table, surrounded by expensive dishes and cutlery, fighting sudden sexual impulses. Ugh! Damn you for making me feel things!! :P
I'm also impressed with the dialogue. You made Ian older (which I totally condone), so he "speaks" as if he was older than the unsure, young Anthony.
Great job! I'm reading every single one of these and you can't stop me. :P
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2. OMG I LOVE CRY <3
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Ahem.
Loved, loved, loved the descriptions. Thought I was reading a manga (with pics and such) instead of a fic. I swear I was sitting at that table, surrounded by expensive dishes and cutlery, fighting sudden sexual impulses. Ugh! Damn you for making me feel things!! :P
I'm also impressed with the dialogue. You made Ian older (which I totally condone), so he "speaks" as if he was older than the unsure, young Anthony.
Great job! I'm reading every single one of these and you can't stop me. :P
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Allow me to fangirl along with you. OMG CRY. I LOVE HIS FUCKING VOICE.
XD thank you, describing is my specialty.
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