Comments | cruiscin_lan: FIC: Leave the Light On For Me

cruiscin_lan

FIC: Leave the Light On For Me

Oct 14, 2009 10:21

Title: Leave the Light On For Me
Characters: Veronica/Logan, Wallace, Duncan, the Casablancas brothers
Rating: Hard R for sex and partial nudity, mentions of rape and murder
Word Count: ~10k
Disclaimer: I don't own any aspect of Veronica Mars or its characters
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers only for first season and preseason. Contains sex and ( Read more... )

character: veronica mars, character: wallace fennel, fandom: veronica mars, character: logan echolls, fanfiction, pairing: logan/veronica

Comments 15

alee23 October 15 2009, 00:32:07 UTC

Ooh I like this! I do like that you had Logan upset with Veronica after Lilly died but showed that Logan couldn't just shake away their friendship completely and still felt drawn to her.

It'd be interesting if you continued this. I've read a few re-duxes but I'm not sure if I've read one where Logan was kind of outcasted too, so I'm definitely intrigued by this!

cruiscin_lan October 15 2009, 03:28:04 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. We'll see where it goes, if it goes anywhere. ;)

montisello October 15 2009, 01:01:38 UTC

Oh man, this was a lot of fun and interesting and I love the way you wove Logan's presence into Veronica's life, her friendship with Wallace. I've always enjoyed stories that used canon events as kind of a springboard for other things. Great job!

cruiscin_lan October 15 2009, 03:30:02 UTC

Thanks!

p2880 October 15 2009, 01:51:51 UTC

I like this very much, but I'm a little confused why the rape doesn't play a bigger role in Veronica's thoughts and actions.

cruiscin_lan October 15 2009, 03:26:45 UTC

I think the main reason for that was because I was trying to keep it from getting too dark... I write myself into really angsty corners sometimes.

celtic_flicka October 16 2009, 19:17:25 UTC

I was thinking the same thing, but maybe I didn't understand the timeline? Did Logan sleep over the night after Shelly's party? Because it seemed a little off to me that Veronica would be eyeing his junk and teasing him about it just one day after being raped.

However, I do like the switch in what happened between them--that everything happened the same way until the salt lick, and then one moment of humanity from Logan completely changed their relationship from that point on. Very interesting.

shanynde October 15 2009, 02:05:54 UTC

loved this!! Great job.

cruiscin_lan October 15 2009, 03:26:52 UTC

Thanks!

peterpan_4_tink October 15 2009, 05:22:17 UTC

This is almost the Logan rescued her fic that i have been waiting for... You're amazing!!

I really like that logan cut her hair... he was part of the transformation in a good way this time :P

Are you continuing... i vote yes on the continuation poll LOL