Comments | cruiscin_lan: Fic: Angel with a Broken Watch, Chapter 9

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Fic: Angel with a Broken Watch, Chapter 9

Jan 12, 2009 15:48

Title: Angel with a Broken Watch, Chapter 9
Characters/Pairings: Elle/Gabriel, a little Elle/Haitian, Bob Bishop
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or any of its characters
Word count: 963
Spoiler alert: definite spoilers for 3.08, AU from there
Summary: It's in her best interest that she doesn't remember any of this...

( Fic and A/N here )

character: bob bishop, rating: pg-13, fanfiction, character: molly walker, character: gabriel gray, angel with a broken watch, pairing: gabriel/elle, character: elle bishop, pairing: elle/haitian, character: sylar

Comments 21

faded_facade January 12 2009, 22:24:03 UTC

I really love your characterization of the Haitian in this fic even though he doesn't even say anything. Just his thoughts are rather touching. I also enjoy your tie-in to season 1 with mentioning Molly Walker and her family.

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next. :)

cruiscin_lan January 13 2009, 18:22:49 UTC

Thanks :) The Haitian's thoughts are probably my favorite part to write.

lil_orli January 12 2009, 22:28:17 UTC

amazing chapter so sad and powerful and the last line was a killer poor elle

cruiscin_lan January 13 2009, 18:23:08 UTC

Thanks for reading :)

superkappa January 12 2009, 23:35:07 UTC

I love how the Hatian is characterized in this. He doesn't get enough Fic time, and you totally do him justice, even though he never speaks.

And poor Elle, she's in such a tight situation, my heart really hurts for her.

cruiscin_lan January 13 2009, 18:23:43 UTC

Thanks :) I do love the Haitian - he's fascinating to write (and not bad to look at, either, of course!)

superkappa January 13 2009, 18:41:45 UTC

I love the Hatian,I really do wish we got to see more of him.

mrstater January 13 2009, 00:32:13 UTC

Yay, an update!

Gosh, you paint such a heart-wrenching Elle. :( And of course Bob had the doctor's office bugged. Why do I doubt that keeping the baby is as much about Bob caring whether Elle does the responsible thing as much as Bob wanting another little mutant baby to experiment on?

This is just so believable as something that could have been going on during season 1!

As usual, I'm eager for the next. ;)

cruiscin_lan January 13 2009, 18:25:12 UTC

Thanks for reading :) And thanks for nominating, too! As you can see from the banner, I'm very proud of that fact...

dragynflies January 13 2009, 01:13:58 UTC

I squee'd like a two year old when I saw this update. I love what you did with it. Elle just breaks my heart in this fic, and as per usual, I love the addition of the Haitian.

cruiscin_lan January 13 2009, 18:26:27 UTC

Thanks - you read the first draft of this chapter like a month ago, right? It's been percolating for a while since then...

dragynflies January 13 2009, 19:19:08 UTC

I know, I've been in withdrawl. This is my favorite WIP, hands down.