FIC: The last thing he wanted to do was hurt her...

[cruiscin_lan]

Title: The last thing he wanted to do was hurt her...
Characters/Pairings: Elle/Haitian
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or any of its characters.
Word count: 801
A/N: Written for perdiccas's Heroes Anonymous Kink Meme II
Prompt:

Comments

[dragynflies]

You made this master list and I realized I hadn't read this one!

This was lovely and so sad...because this is how I imagine Elle's childhood. I like how you started her off so happy and then she went a little bit crazy...and I love how the Haitian connected with her and then ended up being so jealous of Peter.

Late gratitude is late.

[cruiscin_lan]

Thanks for reading :)

[ashesfor_trees]

"All his life he'd only known French and Creole; it was her constant chattering that taught him English."
That's such a sweet line :)

and the end is just so tragic--you write sad things very well :)

Late gratitude is late.

[cruiscin_lan]

Thanks :)

[vodooman]

i only started to see a potential for this ship after reading 'angel with a broken watch'... and now reading this was really what now made me a slight elle/haitian shipper... lol, i could become a bigger one if ... let's say you decided that you wanted to write more of them...
i wonder what thez would call that ship... helle... ellhai... or haile? lol...

anyway... this was really beautiful and sad... just the right amount of both!!!

Late gratitude is late.

[cruiscin_lan]

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it!

Re: Late gratitude is late.

[vodooman]

:-)

[kathrynthegr8]

The idea of The Hatian and Elle growing up together in the company makes so much sense. I enjoyed picturing him being Elle's reluctant playmate and how they eventually came to mean more to each other. Man, I wish the writers would give us more of him and more background on all the characters. This is a really great pairing and I loved reading it.

Late gratitude is late.

[cruiscin_lan]

Thanks for reading :)