Comments | cruiscin_lan: FIC: Thanks for the Pamphlet, Miss Pillsbury

cruiscin_lan

FIC: Thanks for the Pamphlet, Miss Pillsbury

Jan 16, 2010 14:29

Title: Thanks for the Pamphlet, Miss Pillsbury
Characters: Puck/Rachel, Finn/Quinn (and a little Finn/Rachel and Puck/Quinn)
Word Count: 3500
Rating: PG-13 for swearing
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee, all proceeds would go towards the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers through episode 1.13, "Sectionals," to be on the safe ( Read more... )

character: rachel berry, character: noah puckerman, pairing: finn/quinn, character: emma pillsbury, character: quinn fabray, pairing: puck/rachel, rating: pg-13, fanfiction, character: finn hudson, fandom: glee

Comments 45

missmx24 January 16 2010, 19:59:54 UTC

Hahaha. I loved this!
I really liked how you wrote it all as if Finn was speaking. I made it a lot more...funnier.
Poor Miss. Pillsbury. She sure does love her pamphlets though. ;)

cruiscin_lan January 16 2010, 21:55:12 UTC

I wish her pamphlets were real. I'd hand them out for every problem. "Can't get your car to start? Have a pamphlet. Locked out of the house? Read this."

notso_littlej January 17 2010, 02:30:14 UTC

"Dyed your hair a shitty color? Read this one! Are you a ginger? Here, take this!"

Pamphlets = love.

cruiscin_lan January 17 2010, 04:23:07 UTC

Dude, did you know there was a such thing as "kick a ginger day"? I didn't... until I got kicked.

wander_lust_79 January 16 2010, 20:32:33 UTC

hehehee...Im pretty sure thats how Finns mind actually works...good job!!

cruiscin_lan January 16 2010, 21:55:48 UTC

I think when it comes to Finn we should use the term "mind" loosely... :P

wander_lust_79 January 19 2010, 22:28:19 UTC

Lol so true!!! so very true!

andbless_mybaby January 16 2010, 20:40:14 UTC

D'awwww, Finn.

Okay, the truth - I really like Rachel. I mean, yeah, we kissed and stuff, and I was with Quinn at the time, so it was wrong, and that's part of why I think I maybe should forgive her for doing the same kind of thing to me except it was sex, except I probably would have had sex with Rachel if I could have, but I got this problem, like, and I have to think about the mailman that I - wait, what was I even talking about?

This? This was so Finn that it killed me.

It's so weird because sometimes she'll be like "Oh my god I really need a burger right now, like I need a burger" so I get her a burger and she scarfs it down and then like ten minutes later she pukes it up anyway. She obviously didn't need the burger if that's what she's gonna do with it, you know?

Fucking fabulous. Your writing always leaves me with a massive smile on my face.

cruiscin_lan January 16 2010, 21:57:06 UTC

Glad I could make you smile! :)

rolley2001 January 28 2010, 15:28:13 UTC

I totally agree with you on "This is so Finn that it killed me".

*snorts*

Finn is such a tool. However, I do really like Cory!

smm1854 January 16 2010, 21:17:08 UTC

Haha this was awesome. You've written Finn perfectly with the mixture of cluelessness and adorableness

"I have a math test fourth period and I was supposed to meet Brittany in study hall so I could copy her... copy her notes"
Lol they need to show these two together more often

And i loved the ending where Ms. Pillsbury wants to send Santana down to talk about her "issues"
Great fic!

cruiscin_lan January 16 2010, 21:57:53 UTC

Glad you caught that about the ending. Finn was accidentally getting other people in trouble the whole time! :P

smm1854 January 16 2010, 23:38:52 UTC

I can just picture Santana's wrath if she finds out that Finn let it slip. But then Brittany will just whisper something in her ear and it will make it all better :D

cruiscin_lan January 17 2010, 04:23:40 UTC

I luuuuuuuv canon femslash! :D

faded_facade January 16 2010, 21:49:35 UTC

I'm so lost without those ticky boxes!

You captured Finn's voice so well that I could actually see it play out in my head as I was reading. Finn sitting in front of Emma and just babbling on about all this stuff. Especially this part:

It's so weird because sometimes she'll be like "Oh my god I really need a burger right now, like I need a burger" so I get her a burger and she scarfs it down and then like ten minutes later she pukes it up anyway. She obviously didn't need the burger if that's what she's gonna do with it, you know?

That's - that's a pregnancy thing? Oh. I kinda thought maybe she was allergic to ketchup, or something, but that makes sense, too.

I also love the inclusion of all those pamphlets and I could only imagine the titles that were on them.

Such a great fic. :D

cruiscin_lan January 16 2010, 21:54:11 UTC

OMG It's been so long since I posted fic that I forgot the ticky boxes. Oh noes!

Emma and her pamphlets was always one of my favorite gags. I love how she just kind of handed one to Rachel and folded her hands, like magically it was going to make Rachel understand...