Anyone on my flist able or willing to do a hard bitch beta on a Nathan barley fic wot I wrote? It's a companion piece to
this.
It's another one of those fics that tiptoes around the edge of what i think I write well. Thus, it freaks me out. I could probably post it as is - I'm quite confident I can tart up the grammar and punctuation - but I need to know the characterisation works, cos it's a whole new angle...
Lemme know?