Luau Comment Porn

[crowgirl13]

These were written for Queen
eponine119 , who declared a day fo comment porn for her reign
In response to this, I wrote the following:

Predator
the word catches
digs claws
into Jack's thoughts.

An answering purr
of sleek want
Stretches
slinks forward
within him;
revealed only
through a slow
curl of lips
and deepening slouch.

Tree bark
pricks
between shoulder blades;
his vision swallowed
up by feral blue.

This was the reply.


arabella_hope wrote a marvelous piece of AU Crack!fic here. I added the following:

Locking pin loose
under his fingers,
Jack clutches
the safety bar.

Metal bites into calluses
as Sawyer pins him
up against the seat,
Steel edge digging in
to a shoulder blade.

There will be a bruise
right angled L
purple-black souvenir
won above the Midway;
like colored sugar
lip marks stained sweet
on white paper.

Undercurrents of laughter
wind around Ferris wheel spokes
fill vacancies
between constellations.

Yeah, not as much as last time, but it was too friggin' HOT to write!