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St. Hap's Coffeehouse: Comment Fic Free-for-All

Nov 10, 2010 09:40

Alright, so we're going to give this a go.

St. Happenstance's Coffeehouse and Home for Wayward Plot Bunnies presents, for your enjoyment:

A Comment Fic Free-For-All

The rules:

Rules? Who needs 'em!
The point here is to roll around in some words and have fun. Are you stuck on your Nano? Does your daily word count feel like a millstone around your neck ( Read more... )

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themoononastick November 11 2010, 01:51:51 UTC

Inspired by one of your prompts (and just a little too long for one comment >:( )<3333 ( ... )

part 2! themoononastick November 11 2010, 01:52:52 UTC

Korse looks away first and Mikey smiles to himself, chalking up a point for Team Killjoy. Korse sneers in response then pulls out a raygun, pressing a switch on the side to drain the charge then throws it on the floor so it lands halfway between Mikey and the door ( ... )

Re: part 2! crowgirl13 November 11 2010, 03:47:38 UTC

Mikeyway, you are a bad ass. And your unshakable faith in your guys makes me want to cry.

This is fierce and gorgeous. Mikey's POV is sharp, all edges - very fitting for a Killjoy. I love the snap of the interaction between he and Korse. Kickass use of the prompt, darling.

Re: part 2! themoononastick November 12 2010, 21:40:05 UTC

Thank you, bb! I'm glad you approve :D

Re: part 2! turps33 November 11 2010, 09:54:13 UTC

Oh wow.

You know how I go reading badfic because at least they write things I want to read, even if they do so in an OTT fashion. And here's you, posting stuff like this which is amazing and written beautifully and I love it so much.

I can't even say how much. It's like, your Mikey is so strong and has so much faith in his guys and I love that combination.

I could read many more thousands of words of this, but fear if it happened I would die of sheer love.

But I don't care. Because what I way to go.

Re: part 2! themoononastick November 12 2010, 21:44:08 UTC

So much love for you, so much!

When I was writing this I was thinking about that interview where Mikey described the Kobra Kid as a brash hot-head so I'm glad his faith and his strength comes across well.

I was saying to T the other day that I like writing in the Killjoys 'verse because it's the perfect combination of FPF/S and RPF/S so maybe there will be more at some point (once I'm done with other things).

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Re: part 2! turlough November 11 2010, 20:43:28 UTC

In this screencap from the Na Na Na video you've got Korse to the left and two drac(uloid)s to the right. We don't really know what the dracs are yet. If they're humans in masks or something else.

Re: part 2! themoononastick November 12 2010, 21:45:07 UTC

Your comment made me beam like a beaming thing, thank you!

Re: part 2! greedy_dancer November 11 2010, 12:24:08 UTC

And then, they came and rescued him, right? RIGHT?? *clings*

Re: part 2! themoononastick November 12 2010, 21:47:12 UTC

Yes, absolutely yes! And then there was 'oh my god you got captured and might have died' sex between the pairing/threesome/foursome of your choice :D

Re: part 2! romanticalgirl November 11 2010, 17:31:48 UTC

Awesome.

Re: part 2! themoononastick November 12 2010, 21:47:47 UTC

Thank you!

Re: part 2! turlough November 11 2010, 20:37:12 UTC

This is totally awesome! Your Mikey is so wonderfully fierce and his complete certainty that the others will come and rescue him is both heartwarming and scary. And the confrontation with Korse is just perfect.

Re: part 2! themoononastick November 12 2010, 21:48:24 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Re: part 2! isweedan November 14 2010, 19:39:57 UTC

mikeywaaaaay! ::flails::

Unwavering faith in his band FTW.

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