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[crossyourheartt]

and i hope you read this

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[prettyxlies]

you are too goood <333

[thebliss_ofyou]

you are fabulousss
<5

[xmonochromaticx]

adam, i love how you are so poetic. how your words play with the strings of my heart. your message is universal. your life really is a movie. you are worth the world.

[anonymous]

the 2nd one is very well written and very beautiful... the first one just makes me sad.

[crossyourheartt]

thats funny because i was sad when i wrote both of them...and the first one is no good its more of just rambling thoughts

[anonymous]

you need to break out of your patterned style of writing. it's not bad, it just seems typical. you know what i mean, like it just seems like i'm reading a song. well, anyways, create your own style, because that is truel what poet's do.

[crossyourheartt]

i understand what your saying, i can't really help sounding like a song, cause in my head its almost like...whatever rhythm i have in my head it just comes out like a song. and thanks for the constructive criticism, i'll work on it, nobody on here ever says anything bad but its nice to know the truth sometimes