eyes like oceans

[pikasu]

Title: eyes like oceans (we were walking on tightropes from the very beginning)
Rating: pg
Pairing: jaejoong/changmin
Summary: sometimes, it isn't that easy to love something after all. but neither is it that difficult either.
A/N: fic ~challenge~ with maxism12 who fails very much. prompt beneath cut.

Comments

[pikasu]

spot for the-fail-that-takes-dynasties-to-write

[maxism12]

D8

[maxism12]

in between singing and breathing changmin realized he had nothing else

at times he recalls his 9 year old self singing in the showers, on the bus and even in his dreams. there was always a smile on his face whenever he sang.

when he sings, changmin sees stars.

when jaejoong was young he had kissed his neighbour, park yoochun.

when jaejoong was young he had kissed his neighbour, park yoochun.

they made a lovely pair. soulmates, people called them. they were a little more than that though.

I COULD PASTE THE WHOLE PARA ON JAECHUN HERE OMG ;;

nd for once, changmin can read the music notes behind everything and the orchestra of love playing in tune with every breath jaejoong takes.

SOBS

THIS IS BEYOND WORDS, THERE ARE NO ADJECTIVES THAT COULD DESCRIBE THIS, I LOVE THIS TO BITS.

/hides in shame

LET'S KEEP CHALLENGING EACH OTHER (AND CHUNJI) AGAIN AND AGAIN~ ;;

[pikasu]

CRYING I CANT HELP IT I LOVE JAECHUN T__________T
HAVE I MENTIONED HOW MUCH I LOVE JAECHUN?!

[pikasu]

spot for the-tofu-that-resides-in-my-stomach-with-wifi-and-potatoes

[chun_ji]

excuse u i do not reside w/ potatoes D8

woah you wrote so much so fast

brb reading ♥

[chun_ji]

okay. firstly jaemin!!! flails at you. the prompt is beautiful :')

summer 2003 is when changmin meets jaejoong

[maxism12]

again, whatever she says.

[natipooh]

To be honest, I didn't quite understand what's going on here, or what the title has to do with anything. I couldn't even see the JaeMin here.
I didn't like this -.-

The William Shakespeare phrase however, was awesome.

[pikasu]

ah, it's a lovely phrase, isn't it! and thank you so much for being honest :') i'm sorry it didn't work for you! are there any specific parts where you found it confusing or- ? i'll definitely keep your criticism in mind for future fics :D thank you for bothering to point them out!

[natipooh]

Hmm It's like I couldn't answer the basic question: what is this piece about? It was way too abstract for me I guess. I was reading your summary at the end and yes, even that was way too abstract for my taste.

It's just a personal opinion, I've seen most people liked this. But I almost never like what the masses like ;-)

Thanks for sharing though ♥

[whatifgirl86]

OMG I don't even know what to say.

I really enjoyed reading this:D

[pikasu]

aw thank you! i'm glad it worked for you, and thank you for reading! :')

[anna6285]

OH GOD. I'm loving the JaeChun and JaeMin here!
<3333
I adore how lost Changmin was and how he couldn't say those three words at the end~
I am forever bowing before your amazingness.

[pikasu]

:D JAECHUN! ♥ and aha thank you so much! i'm glad it worked for you! and heheh a cookie for the jaechun :p /hugs you/