[FIC - Inception] The Helix Trap Chapter 1/19

[croik]

What do rich guys wear to bed? Do you suppose Robert has $500 boxers? This is going to be very important come chapter 4.

Fandom: Inception
Title: The Helix Trap
Chapter: 1/19 (6,068 words) (For other parts please check my My main post)
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Eames/Robert, Arthur/Ariadne, Cobb, Yusuf, Saito, Browning, and others.

Comments

[croik]

Glad you're enjoying it! :D

[ryuko_midori]

OH NO AN ERROR "he cast Ariadne a meaningful look that she had no trouble deciphering: e careful"

I am reading your fanfic now! Keep writing it! (not like well frogs........)

[croik]

OH SNAP, you got me ;o; But seriously I am going to go back to Well Frogs. I have it plotted and everything! But I need to replay AJ, it's been a long time.

RARRRRRRRRRR I'm so bad ._.;;

But I'm glad you like this new fic <3 Thanks for the spot!

[a_rocky_ravine]

I can totally get behind the idea of $500 boxers. The way he mentioned the price of his wallet IN A DREAM tells me he's comfortable with his nice things.

Also, awesome! I love the details you've added to this since my last read through-- like Saito's company name. (I confess, I know he probably said it once in the helicopter scene but I couldn't make it out! Clearly I need the shooting script they published. 8D)

And on a related note: I saw the film once more on Sunday, so I'm fresh on the details again to keep on betaing! (I didn't see it solely to help you polish this fic, of course...!)

[croik]

I can send the script to you! Except not right now, it's on my laptop. I'll email it along with chapter 2 when it's finished (which should be tomorrow...?)

Ooh is it still playing by you? I think there's only one theatre around me that is, but it's far away yay torrent

[a_rocky_ravine]

Ooh, you've got it typed/scanned in? That would be wonderful to have, thank you! :DDD And yes, it's still sharing an auditorium with another film on its way out. (I suspect we're going to lose it after this week's turnover. Woe.)

[chypie]

: D A shooting script, you say?

I second the interest in that, if it's not too much trouble! I'm sure it'd help me refresh my memory.

[elliesmeow]

Wow, so I just wanna take Robert away to a place where he'll be cuddled and loved like he deserves. Aside from the obvious reprisal I think the idea to break up his father's company was grand for him as an individual. Seems like the two most important people in his life since his mother died have put that company above him. That's just baggage he doesn't need.

Arthur's carnival dream was creeeepy! Glad he showed up in time to save Ariadne from his projections. Interesting experiment though.

Banks is a fascinating character. I'm curious to see how she interacts with each member of the team and why. I liked the background we've got on her so far.

Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope Robert will be ok.*hugs him*

-Ellie

[croik]

Thank you! I'm glad you like Banks, I know OCs can be a crapshoot sometimes.

[chypie]

You do just keep improving this with little details! I like how you changed the last line to involve his die, like he's double checking. That... actually just happened, didn't it?

I also vote for the $500 boxers. Something silky-luxurious and ~comfortable~. Or silky pajammy pants maybe. I am looking forward as to why this is important. :D

[croik]

Ooooh silky boxers. How delightful~

And thanks! The truth is, I changed the last line because when I was reading it back I thought..."Wait, who is he calling!?" And I couldn't remember, lol.

[chypie]

Aha ha! Well, whatever the reason, it works out well. : )

[a_rocky_ravine]

I'm sorry, I should have questioned the phone call myself. XD I assumed Arthur was jumping the gun and calling Charla back post haste, but I should have asked for clarification. I'll be more vigilant with the chapter under review now~!

And thank you for the script! I am loving some of the deleted material.