P036: and all this time

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From: junmyeons

Title: and all this time
Prompt Code: P036
Rating: PG-13
Length: 16159 words
Summary: Junmyeon runs with lightning crackling at his heels while flowers grow in between cement. (Or, Junmyeon is a clusterfuck of events he pretends he’s not made of, and, guess what, so is everyone else.)
Warnings: heavy themes of anxiety, mentions

Comments

[j2ster]

wow. this was amazing, extremely well thought out. i don't usually read triggering materials like this, mostly because most of the time it's so unfamiliar still and i have a hard time to relate, however hard i want to understand, but i think i made a good choice with this one. i loved all the tiny details, the house plants and the omelet and everything else. the shift between high school junmyeon and college junmyeon was natural, i knew which of the two i was reading even if it was present tense all through out. i loved your writing style, how you made it so that junmyeon's thoughts were a huge part of the story itself, how it wasn't just you telling but also him feeling. i don't know how to describe it, but it's there. i loved how junmyeon tried even if it was hard and jongdae tried to hold him and it wasn't alright right away but they made it work. the ending saw bright possibilities and i'm happy for junmyeon, and jongdae too. thank you for writing this. it was a refreshing read and i loved it.