P033: all the pieces of the break evaporate

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From: untitledminds

Title: all the pieces of the break evaporate
Prompt Code: P033
Rating: PG-13
Side pairing/s: minor!Sehun/Lu Han
Length: 6787 words
Summary: Dealing with fourteen barking dogs who like to poop is the least of Jongdae’s concerns.

Notes: i have to apologise if some parts seem rushed bc i didn’t have time to let it flourish and develop on its

Comments

[anonlock]

I'm so delighted. I didn't think anyone would choose my prompt. I didn't think anyone would fulfil the candy points either, it seemed a bit crazy even to me lol I was obviously wrong and even more than that but I got to read an adorable fic like this <3

I've read it more than once already. I just like this so much, how did you manage to pack so much into 6k words? I want to comment about everything! I loved how you wrote Jongdae's character and his relationship with Jongin and Sehun. Junmyeon's character deserves a big mention as well he's just as a little bit cool as corny and a bit lame but in a cute way that is totally his. It's freaking adorable how they instantly crush on one another but remain oblivious to each other's feelings. There was just the right amount of romance. You didn't waste any words on this and it shows; everything integrates well into the AU and ends up reflecting a part of each character's personality. The bits of comedy were also well-timed and pure gold. I couldn't stop laughing when Chanyeol's over-excited ferret glued itself to Jongdae's face, I re-read it about three times the first time I read the fic and I laughed out loud every single time.

The end is as precious as the rest, my heart felt warm at how things ended up working out for Jongdae.

I'm so happy that you happened to read, choose and write my prompt. I'm forever grateful for this wonderful fic, thank you!

[untitledminds]

aw!! your prompt was absolutely adorable and at first i didn't id be able to fulfil the candy points either but hard ! work ! pays ! off! (i was worried it would seem too excessive hahaha)

gah thank you so much i'm so glad you're satisfied with it!! i was worried that it would be too short and everything would be too rushed but im glad that you found it progressed smoothly! thank you thank you thank you for liking my characterisation that the relationships bc it's smthing rly important to me and obviously writing the characters were just so much fun and i was worried i wouldn't be able to show junmyeon's feelings properly since it was written from jongdae's pov but im happy that you like it!

comedy is imo rly hard to pull off and smthing im constantly trying to do so thank you for saying that :)))

i'm rly glad that you prompted this and read this and enjoyed it! thank you for your warm comments they really really mean a lot! <3