TW021: Breathe

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From: hornet394

Title: Breathe
Prompt Code: TW021
Rating: NC-17
Side Pairing(s): Baekhyun/D.O, Sehun/Lay, implied Lay/GF members
Length: 10303 words
Summary: Junmyeon is a cat hybrid that has been rotting in the pet store since forever. As he's slowly starting to get desperate, he catches the eyes of a potential master, a bright man named Jongdae. Only, he

Comments

[elladen]

Oh, this is beautiful!
Seeing Junmyeon and Jongdae were awkward and testing the waters when they first got together is all kinds of adorable. Cat hybrid Junmyeon is probably the cutest and I can imagine him pouting and doing all these cute expressions! When he was secretly plotting against Chanyeol though. ;3; he probably was intimidated at first.

But so glad everything worked out!! JunDae are just so domestic together I can't even.
And the bBaekSoo adn SeXing ;A;

Thank you for writing this! <3

[j2ster]

this was absolutely sweet and adorable!

i loved the addition of gf geges who loved pampering yixing just as much as sehun did. baekhyun and kyungsoo's relationship was just too melancholically sweet, it made my heart ache but in a good way. that one brilliant sentence about kitten junmyeon having to ask for money to buy his brothers food in the streets had me a little teary-eyed. hyperactive chanyeol was a fresh addition to this fic.

i loved how junmyeon referred to jongdae as master (both verbally and in his head) throughout the whole fic despite jongdae telling him not to, how subtly you alluded to the hierarchy of "master" and "pet", and honestly it was just the right depth for this length of fic and it's great. i loved how soft jongdae was to junmyeon, how he tried to understand even if it was novel to him, and how junmyeon learned alongside him and it was hard and they stumbled a lot but they persisted for each other.

this was a pleasant read. thank you for writing this!