P037: You’re my golden sky

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From: baestill

Title: You’re my golden sky
Prompt Code: P037
Rating: NC-17
Length: 3200 words
Summary: But right there, Joonmyeon decided that it didn’t matter how many riches - how many treasures he owned. Because compared to the male in front of him, it was all nothing but stones and sand.
Warnings: Mentions of suicide, masturbation

Notes: First I

Comments

[darkyulate]

IM DYING both figuratively and literally. wow omg this was so cool! such a great idea to make suho a god and then chen a demigod. I LOVE GREEK MYTHOLOGY SO I WAS SQUEALING INSIDE. I loved how you wrote their story, how you wrote their love and omg even though your ending was a bit on the tragic side, it definitely fit with the greek myth sad/tragic ending themes.

brb just gonna cry for now and maybe forever

WAIT EDIT
Any mortal would die by drowning, but if a God drowned he’d belong to the sea.
THIS LINE SHOULD WIN AN AWARD BTW so beautiful ;_;

[theshadowsdance]

this is beautifully written, it flows well effortlessly
nooo that last line broke me

[j2ster]

OH. oh. hold on so did jongdae actually die or just belong to the sea? bc he's half mortal half god so i'm confused??? no one in the comments section seem to be asking about this so maybe i'm the dumb one... but anyways. this was so beautifully written!! there was no unnecessary things involved, and i loved how junmyeon and jongdae just grew into each other so naturally. the absence of dialogue added to the tranquil atmosphere you created here. just simply beatiful. thank you for writing.

[bianca747]

This was so beautiful and had a sense of calm for the most part. I loved all the beautiful descriptions.
Then there's the storm in the end and that last line. T__T