Snow Carefully Everywhere Descending

[crinolynne]

Title: Snow Carefully Everywhere Descending
Author: Crinolynne
E-mail: wonderful.pistachio@gmail.com
Distribution: Feel free, but just send an e-mail to let me know first
Rating: PG-13
Category: A little bit of everything.

Disclaimer:  Not mine, don't sue, I am a poor boy from a poor family, etc. Spoilers: Never Again Summary: He grinds his teeth a bit,

Comments

[deltachild]

Oh wow, this totally took my breath away.

There are so many beautiful phrases and lines in this. I knew as soon as I read "...and drives them north beneath a low sky heavy with snow." that I was in for a treat. You set out such beautiful scenes, and the tone of the writing makes it all feel so intimate.

I love reading about the fall out from Scully's interactions with Jerse and this is one of the most satisfying ones I have come across. Gorgeous.

[lady_sesstra]

I love this. I always wondered if they ever resolved this whole...thing after the episode ended. I could totally see this happening.

Is it okay if I follow you for more fic updates? I really enjoy your writing style.

[mack_the_spoon]

You know, I haven't read much XF fic recently, but this was lovely. I'd like to think they had a little resolution to this, too, and I think I'd like it if it went like this.

[namarie24]

I enjoyed this exploration of how M&S could move on a little bit from this episode. Nicely done.

[newo_fic]

This was lovely and fresh, filling the hole that the end of Never Again left wonderfully.

Mulder’s thought about kissing her lately, the way her mouth would taste of lipstick and coffee, her hair perfumed with a mixture of morgue and Pantene.

He’d give up the idea if it meant she’d talk. He’d sacrifice the pleasures of the flesh for higher goals which, he reflects with some irony, is the kind of trade-off that comes with working with a Catholic girl.

I love that you highlight Mulder's desire for her, but that his ultimate desire is to know her, to hear her. And, later on, by ordering for her, he knows herso well and, at the same time, not in the way that's most important to him. And then when she starts positing on why she did what she did, he almost doesn't know how to handle Open!Scully.

All of this is to basically say I like the complexity you've created in this short piece. Well done!

[galaxyduster]

Beautiful story, it captured me right away! Thank you!!!!