One-shot: Laws of Attraction

[phoenix_zeal]

Author's note February 2011: This was written in June 2008. I haven't really changed anything and everything is pretty much the same as when I first posted it back then. Don't expect any sort of quality when it comes to the writing, grammar or the language used.

Title: Laws of Attraction
Author: phoenix_zeal
Pairings: KuroDa (Kurosawa/Ishida)
Rating: NC-17

Comments

[moon_catcher]

yo! ^o^/

this is me reading one of your REALLY OLD fics just because we were talking about it earlier :p

I'm gonna leave here a little ♥ and nothing else; you most probably know yourself how much your writing has improved since the time this fic was written and at some point of our lives, we all had this time when a fic didn't need much of a plot as long as there were Jin and Kame, or their drama characters in this case LOL

;__; sorry about the lack of excitement, the fic is not in blame, okay? My day just sucks in general because I've been working on an article for what seems like an eternity now, the deadline is near and I'm nowhere finishing /crawls away
I shouldn't be leaving comments in such a state .__.''

[phoenix_zeal]

Eep!

I'm so embarrassed about my smut fics, especially since I absolutely hate writing smut. XD

Yes, thank goodness I improved since I wrote this. o_o ♥

Awww, I'm sorry to hear that. *offers snuggles and blankets* ♥ I hope that you'll be able to finish it in time!

[moon_catcher]

You totally DID improve a lot!
It's another reason to keep the old stuff around, so you can always go back and realize how much better you have become in writing with time :) Even though you feel forever embarrassed when reading your old stuff.
I can hardly open the files with my really old stories.. and those I wrote at 14 or 16 are just to be laughed at >__> But they are still a part of what I've become anyway.

Well, as much awkward as I feel about sex in rl, I actually don't mind writing/reading about it when it's not some really weird or kinky stuff because then I do feel uncomfortbale no matter what
But really, even though you hate writing it and this fic is not perfect, it's still MUCH BETTER than a lot of stuff posted out there >__> People should consider writing these things when they know nothing about how sex works in general :|
/rant

[phoenix_zeal]

I still have the files on my computer and backup copies and I have all of my notebooks from when I was younger. I totally can't read them, though, because I collapse in a pile of embarrassment if I do. ._.

I do read it sometimes if it's somehow relevant enough to the plot so I have to read it but mostly I just skip it.
I didn't know how sex worked when I wrote this because I'm forever awkward and I didn't even want to come close to knowing though I do know now... so I just sort of... imitated what I'd read in other fics, lol. XD