Recency bias

Jun 09, 2014 18:50

It was dank, wet where she sat, huddled into a stony corner. She awoke in the dark to the sound of water dripping not far away. Or maybe she wasn't awake. All her dreams looked so much like this that she didn't know which side of the veil she was on ( Read more... )

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kickthehobbit June 10 2014, 01:39:27 UTC
This is creepy and wonderful and absolutely nails the topic. :D

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lawchicky June 10 2014, 18:03:47 UTC
This was creepy - there is something about dripping and dampness that always makes me feel uneasy.

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n3m3sis43 June 11 2014, 02:07:42 UTC
So creepy.

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jem0000000 June 11 2014, 08:26:25 UTC
I like the repetition of the dripping and the water/dampness imagery. :)

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i_17bingo June 11 2014, 14:08:11 UTC
Yikes. I wonder who she was before. Not that it really matters now... yikes.

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