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[crimson__kisses]

Dear Friends,

I've fallen back in love with the hiaku.

Mesh caps and warm breeze,
Drive out with the windows down,
Put up your hair, SMILE!
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One, two, three, four, five,
I can't count to seven.
No job or money.
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They say we all fall,
Even spill proof cups can't hold.
Trust me I have stains.
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Love always,
Hiram Peña

P.S. It would be nice if I got some sweet comments on my poetry.