Dieu Et Mon Droit -1/?-

[crimjob]

Title: Dieu Et Mon Droit (God and My Right)
Author: Me.
Pairing: UK/France, but it's not very pairing-heavy.
Rated Overall: M for ideologically sensitive material, violence, gore, Nazi themes.
This Chapter's Rating: PG-13 for violence and gore
Summary: The blitzes are going on in London and France has been taken over by the Nazi defeatists. Despite the

Comments

[audreyhasacape]

The history! The angst! The drama! I love this because not only did I learn something (they tried to join governments again? I had no idea), it was heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Right off the bat, your description of London during the blitz was haunting and poetic. Perhaps the ellipses were a bit overused, but I think they added to the narrative effect and really gave Arthur a distinctive voice.

Wonderful work! I'll be patiently awaiting the next installment. :D

[crimjob]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it.

[zalia]

Hi! This seems like it's going to be the start of an interesting story and I can't wait to see the development of France and England's relationship through such a difficult period. Gah, I love seeing them during this time and I'm looking forward to seeing more!

There were a couple of factual errors though that I found a bit jarring. You can't see London from France. It's about 100 miles from London to Calais (the nearest point in France), and there are a lot of hills and other cities in between them.

Also um, Grimsby and Cleethorpes are nowhere near the Scottish border ^^; I'm from fairly near Grimsby and Scotland is a couple of hundred miles away at least.

But otherwise, I did enjoy the fic and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

[crimjob]

Thank you for the input! The only way I know British geography, unfortunately, is from maps and friends XD Thanks for setting me straight- I'll fix the errors straight away.