[fanfic] passenger side; the killing, holder/linden; pg13

[crickets]

So I know I promised finale discussion but I ended up having to work a 12 hour shift today so it was either come home and unwind and talk episode things, or come home, unwind and write post-ep fic. I chose fic, clearly.

Comments

[gigglemonster]

Ugh I love this!
The way you've mirrored those first two sections just ;alsdfj DEATH
And her leaving and him watching her and that message and everything hurts.

She needs it, and it's his job now to protect her. To make sure she's better.

Or maybe it's the other way around?

;______;
I LOVE THEM SO MUCH.
AND YOU.
AND THIS.

[crickets]

♥

I don't know what to say. I'm just trying to use as few Ws as possible.

[timewaslost]

oh god
this is possibly the most fantastic thing
ever

[crickets]

♥

Thank you so much love!

[mfirefly10]

THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!

Ugh, I could actually hear Holder's voice when I read the section with the message, it was so very him.

Also...

He also doesn't tell her how two days in Carlson sent him home because he kept seeing fucking Jamie Wright's face every time he turned around and it messed him up so bad he couldn't sleep and they had to march him down to the shrink a coupla times. He doesn't talk about that at all, but Sarah looks him in the eye and says, "How you holding up?" And she touches his arm and he nearly flinches because she's not the touching type and because it's like she knows exactly what he's thinking.

Perfection.

And the ending was awesome and this is basically everything I wanted from post-season 2 Holder/Linden fic ♥

[crickets]

Hee!

Thank you very much for that. I find getting dialogue just right to be one of the more challenging aspects of writing. Especially when it comes to making it really sound like the character. Much appreciated.

These two! They do things to me.

[timidwildone]

So, this is actually going to happen, right? Because it seems like it could. It seems like it SHOULD.

GAH! So beautiful, and so perfectly them. ESPECIALLY the phone message. And the end. And the beginning. And everything in between.

*standing ovation*

[timidwildone]

Oh, and since I somehow failed to mention it in my first response...that screencap is L O V E L Y.

[crickets]

♥ Thank ya.

[crickets]

ONE CAN ONLY HOPE.

Thank you thank you!!!

I don't think I've ever had a standing ovation before. *bows*

[gypsy_sally]

Oh man, this is so perfect. Characterization spot on, tone, pace, everything.

I totally dreamed a post-finale Holder/Linden fic last night. A lengthy one, with a mystery arc, maybe five or six episodes worth of material if I padded it out, and so PERFECT.

Then I woke up. Now it's gone. Except for the very end, which I can maybe work with.

Gah, I just want ALL THE FIC in this fandom.

Which is to say: PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE.

[crickets]

Thank you I really appreciate that! I think I tried to take a page from the show in the restraint department, haha.

You should try and work with it! I wish I dreamed of them last night, haha.

I do too! God. SHOW OF MY HEART.

I will. TRUST.