[fanfic] a house unbuilt; caroline/stefan, the vampire diaries; r

Apr 23, 2011 15:33

title; rating: a house unbuilt; pg13
pairing, fandom; wordcount: caroline/stefan, the vampire diaries; 879
notes: more future!fic for these two; for the prompt "brick" @ fc_smorgasbord
I remembered after writing this that ghosts are in fact a part of series canon. Apologies.
do you believe in ghosts? )

fanfic: the vampire diaries, !fanfic

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crickets April 24 2011, 00:32:17 UTC
Thank you very much! I appreciate it! I'm glad it worked since they're your fav.

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parttimelurker April 24 2011, 02:35:40 UTC
Lovely lovely lovely. I also admit to a deep, abiding love for this couple, and even if it'll never happen on the show, I can believe that something like this could take place in the future.

Caroline grabs his hand. "Stay?" she asks. And there's a danger in her voice that Stefan ignores. He moves to lock the deadbolt, and by the time he's through, Caroline is already tugging at his collar from behind. He turns in her grasp, and for the first time, their mouths connect.

This. I love this. And the line about how she bit her tongue....little snippets echoing of unspoken, unwarranted emotion.

My heart broke a little for Caroline's childlike hope for some kind of forgiveness/peace/understanding from Liz, and her desire to be a friend to werewolves because of the connection she had with Tyler. You can't fix the world, baby doll, but we love you for thinking you can.

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crickets April 24 2011, 04:05:57 UTC
Thank you! They really have a ton of potential for the future. And yes, that's one of my favorite thing about Caroline, she really does have this innocent hopeful quality to her. Despite everything.

Thanks again!

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ozmissage April 24 2011, 02:44:16 UTC
They sleep. They fuck. They're just friends. They're more. They love each other and hate each other.

And so on. They collide and separate like the crashing of waves, like the notes in a song, until time and age has made them too tired to fight it any more.

Damn, that's gorgeous. I love the way you write this pairing. <3

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crickets April 24 2011, 04:06:39 UTC
Hee! Yay! I am so glad. They make me happy and I'm glad you're into them as well! Thank you! :)

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mfirefly10 April 24 2011, 02:59:27 UTC
Oh, I love this!!! It's my personal canon that at the end of it all, Stefan + Caroline will end up together. And not just because there's no one else left but because I think they've always been moving in that direction.

I absolutely love the way you write these two :]

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crickets April 24 2011, 04:08:00 UTC
They really do work and make a lot of sense. I love the idea of time eventually bringing these two together. Hence why I have written it, I suppose!

Thank you very much! :)

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by_juliajewels April 24 2011, 18:14:10 UTC
Here you totally captured what I love about Caroline/Stefan. He is grounded, empathetic yet and little jaded. And Caroline is strong and can be ruthless, but she is also so vulnerable and has the biggest heart. They fit together like pieces of a puzzle.

And so on. They collide and separate like the crashing of waves, like the notes in a song, until time and age has made them too tired to fight it any more.

Just lovely...

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crickets April 24 2011, 20:50:12 UTC
Aw, thank you! This is a really nice compliment.

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