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[fic] who is the lamb?; lost, claire/jack, esau/jacob; r

Apr 20, 2010 11:19

who is the lamb?; r
lost, claire/jack, jacob/esau; 1043
beta read by kmousie
( his sister reaches for his hand )

Comments 5

woodshavings April 26 2010, 18:02:31 UTC

Wow, this was really good. I especially like how you wrote this: He comes to her, a tall, lanky man with kind eyes and salt-and-pepper hair.

Great image of Esau you have there :)

Plus, your use of words is fantastic throughout! Well done!

crickets April 28 2010, 01:01:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

weatheredlaw May 3 2010, 20:46:16 UTC

Jack and Claire take over the island and wage another war of morals?

This is how it SHOULD end.

crickets May 8 2010, 01:29:15 UTC

I think that would be awesome, haha.

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crickets May 11 2010, 00:44:46 UTC

A bunch of my jack/claire and one jawyercita got posted all at once so they were easy to miss!

So glad you liked it and that scene in particular. I was inspired, ;)

I really like your idea about how Claire would only agree to stay if she had Jack's promise that he would never leave her. You should definitely write it when you have the time!