I really love this. It took me awhile to read. Strangely enough, I was checking your page to see if you had updated and I'd missed it, the very same night you posted about trying to post it all. I've re-read the first 2 installment a few times, actually, and was hoping, hoping, that you were really going to continue, and boy, did you! This is really fantastic. The amount of detail in the backstory is wonderful, lots of depth. It was hard to read about Ianto's abusive past, but you wrote it very well. I'd really like to read about how he and Oliver got together initially, I hope that's one of the things you have planned for future installments. The action sequences are very well written, lots of suspense and it really draws you in. I'm glad you gave Ianto some good relationships too, not just Oliver. One of my personal kinks about Ianto is that I like him to be bisexual in the past before Jack, so you provided that in spades, which made me very happy. Ooh, and the thing about the compound he injects - wow, really interesting.
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way-hey! Really happy to know people are actually checking to see if I update! (and re-reading when I haven't!) Sorry it took so long but you can see how much I ended up writing! I never stopped writing it, just took forever to finish it and then get it to a postable-quality
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Well, I didn't even mention how great your explanations were for what happened in Fragments! The explanation for the pteradactyl (or whatever,haha) was perfect, and great description of how Ianto caught it, etc. And I loved the scene where Jack stops the SUV in front of Ianto and they go off to catch Myfanwy (well, the whole pteradactyl scene is one of my very favs out of all TW anyway and I always loved the shot with Ianto's butt in front of the SUV and then Jack's double take when Ianto asks him if he's not going to help him catch the dino -I'm still hoping to fit that shot of Ianto's butt in front of SUV into a video somehow, hehe
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thank you very much for the rec!! Already had one reader from it (quaintheart)! I feel flattered - I've been tracked down on tw-storyfinder with part 2 and now recced with part three! Am meaning to settle down with the laptop in about ten minutes and have a go at part 4, so this is good motivation!!
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